Ok so I have this story concept that I want everyone's opinion on.
EDIT: I left this out, this is a film idea. Specifically this has to do with my chosen career path dealing with entertainment. Most likely this will become an animated web series in later years...
I have a lot to work on, I know, but I want everyone's general opinions and advice on this and ways to improve it. I know it's not the most original idea, but I think it has enough to be built on. I just don't want it to fall flat on it's face because I'm too lazy to fill in blanks of reason with something other than "for the lolz."In the not too distant future, a world Government has taken control of the world as an act of world peace. Nothing to unique there, I know. The world is then divided into a small number of territories referred to as Sectors across the 6 major continents. Sector Subzero is the entirety of the arctics since they are literally frozen wastelands that no one lives in.
Here's where things are unique in my mind, and I have yet to see someone do this. The world government is divided into Dictators of each Sector. Each Dictator is free to do whatever the hell he wants in his sector as long as he doesn't harm other sectors. So as some places may be paradise on earth, others are hell holes.
The story itself pays attention to one specific sector, Sector East Western, which is roughly the eastern third of the United States. In this sector, there is a specially trained group of enforcers designed for personal assignments and take orders directly from the Dictator himself. Residents of each sector know little about the other sectors that don't neighbor them, and the enforcing team is no different. In fact, this team knows even less. They don't question their orders, they do as they're told.
The Dictator decides to screw with some things for reasons I have not yet decided and assigns his minions to assassinate a visiting religious icon from a neighboring sector. This obviously stirs up problems and with having no evidence the Dictator ordered the assassination, the team must go into hiding and survive against a world-wide bounty on their heads for disrupting peace.
EDIT: I left this out, this is a film idea. Specifically this has to do with my chosen career path dealing with entertainment. Most likely this will become an animated web series in later years...