Opinions on Animation?

[EcHoFiiVe]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-7nqeyvdf1I&feature=channel_video_title

Just wanted some opinions on an animation I made in Cinema 4D as a youtube video intro. Not horrendous for a first try I'd say. Any criticism is welcome, just please keep it constructive.

Also any help with posting the video directly to the post would be greatly appreciated lol.

 

[PayneTrayne]

Pretty cool, the backgrounds a bit bland though, also a li'l bit long for an intro.

 

[Wapox]

quite nice. but as said before, a bit too long for an intro, and the colors are a bit too blendy, people who can't see colors too well, might not see the e5

 

[EcHoFiiVe]

quite nice. but as said before, a bit too long for an intro, and the colors are a bit too blendy, people who can't see colors too well, might not see the e5

Yeah, basically for some background if you don't have any experience with the program, you create a sky and add a texture to it and then give the materials reflective properties to reflect back and make them look real. I still have not figured out how to render out the animation without the background. And I might shorten this up to like 3-5 seconds, without the reversed footage.