Order And Chaos: A Superpower RP (Started, Closed)

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TheIronRuler

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Dr. wonderful said:
I'm not the GM but I admit, your character sheet is pretty solid. I also think the blood thing is pretty neat.
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It's familiar from a tv show/manga from Japan, same powers. Lets see what's the bio is gonna look like.
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PrinceOfShapeir said:
avouleance2nd said:
I'd also like a word
However if you can't give one I'll assume the lack of immidate rejection means it's ok for now
Silence only implies consent in court, Avouleance. And even then it's a pretty huge gray area.
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I only wish God has a hidden commandment that moses forgot, "Don't be a dick", whenever I see some of your replies.

And to stop you from your snarky answer - I don't care.
PrinceOfShapeir said:
I also really, really do not care.
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To the GM - Same here. I'm eager to hear your opinion.
 

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Hello everyone, I'm not new to the escapist but I am new to the forums. I kind of stumbled on the role playing forum and being someone who enjoys a good story I thought it'd be fun to get into. And this was more of the interesting ones that I found.

Lambi There's already a lot going on in this thread I was wondering if you could give a condensation of everyone who is currently playing, or rather, who actually has characters ready to go. Also maybe How many more people you have open slots vs how many people are showing interest at the time? There seems to be a bit of chaos. Or maybe I'm just having a hard time following whats going on.

I'm going to go work on my character right meow :)
 

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TheIronRuler said:
Dr. wonderful said:
I'm not the GM but I admit, your character sheet is pretty solid. I also think the blood thing is pretty neat.
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It's familiar from a tv show/manga from Japan, same powers. Lets see what's the bio is gonna look like.
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PrinceOfShapeir said:
avouleance2nd said:
I'd also like a word
However if you can't give one I'll assume the lack of immidate rejection means it's ok for now
Silence only implies consent in court, Avouleance. And even then it's a pretty huge gray area.
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I only wish God has a hidden commandment that moses forgot, "Don't be a dick", whenever I see some of your replies.

And to stop you from your snarky answer - I don't care.
PrinceOfShapeir said:
I also really, really do not care.
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To the GM - Same here. I'm eager to hear your opinion.
You do know it's against the rules to insult people, right? Just making sure. Anyway, my point was that Avouleance really should not assume that Thor is okay just because Thor hasn't said anything yet.
 

Lambi

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I'm going to start on telling my opinions on some sheets right now. Be patient, I'll get to your sheet if you don't see it here.

Lunar Templar said:
For starters, you need to use capital letters more. It looks much better if you'd do that.

Secondly, I have problems with her alignment. If she doesn't care about humans and their affairs, why even be involved?

I don't really see a problem with dragons, but her cursed flame I have a problem with. I'm not sure I want to have someone who has the power of flames that can't be extinguished by natural means.

avouleance2nd said:
Your sheet just looks awful. It hurts to read due to lack of any kind of grammar. If you do not brush up on your grammar, I cannot allow you to join. And I know that I mentioned that you and Vuvzelaman could make your characters with shared backstory, but while your sheet has such terrible grammar, I can't allow you to join.

Withmir said:
I'll say it right away that I don't want any kind of light manipulation. I probably should have mentioned that in the OP, but ah well. A bit late to mention that now.

Redryhno said:
Same goes for darkness manipulation, whether it's just minor or major.

Souplex said:
Your sheet is way too short to even consider allowing, plus time manipulation is not something I want to see.

TheIronRuler said:
Same to you regarding the time manipulation, plus I have some problem with your other two powers being something your character's had since birth.

Shadowstar38 said:
Your character's possession power irks me. I can understand that you might only use it on NPCs, but I still don't like it. I'd rather it not be there.

drmigit2 said:
Your character doesn't sit well with me. How can someone multitask so well with little problem? And I can't say I like that mech suit.
 

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Lambi said:
Alright. I'll go ahead and remove that power. Should I also get rid of the reduced ageing effects? I only ask because you had a problem with someone who was totally immortal, and I dont want to risk it.
 

Lambi

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Shadowstar38 said:
Lambi said:
Alright. I'll go ahead and remove that power. Should I also get rid of the reduced ageing effects? I only ask because you had a problem with someone who was totally immortal, and I dont want to risk it.
Maybe if you change it to just being able to take more damage than a normal human. Otherwise, it should look good.
 

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Lambi said:
Lunar Templar said:
For starters, you need to use capital letters more. It looks much better if you'd do that.

Secondly, I have problems with her alignment. If she doesn't care about humans and their affairs, why even be involved?

I don't really see a problem with dragons, but her cursed flame I have a problem with. I'm not sure I want to have someone who has the power of flames that can't be extinguished by natural means.
yeah, i know, weird habit i have while typing

i can lose the the cursed flame, it was just a neat sounding ability anyway, but I'll probably fill that gap with more control over her 'blue napalm'

cept the actual 'cannon version' of Rozalin. she'd care, but you'd hate her, as i wouldn't really be flexible with that version in terms of strengths/weaknesses and so on. she like the oldest character i have, so I'm not really willing to change that version for anyone
 

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Arcanist said:
Lambi said:
Just noticed that there was another electric hero with a lot of similarities to Ohm (my hero 2.0); a hero who was posted well before Ohm was - to prevent overlap, I'm withdrawing her and will implement a different Hero (if I can think of another one)

Sorry for not noticing Arcanist; I promise I wasn't trying to steal your thunder

Sorry for the pun, I just couldn't... resist!

I'll just shut up now ^_^
 

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hiei82 said:
Arcanist said:
Lambi said:
Just noticed that there was another electric hero with a lot of similarities to Ohm (my hero 2.0); a hero who was posted well before Ohm was - to prevent overlap, I'm withdrawing her and will implement a different Hero (if I can think of another one)

Sorry for not noticing Arcanist; I promise I wasn't trying to steal your thunder

Sorry for the pun, I just couldn't... resist!

I'll just shut up now ^_^
Don't worry, I think I can find the capacity to forgive.
 

Korten12

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Name: Vex Grazer

Alias: None

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Appearance: Both his armor and his clothes are combined. He wears a grey shirt with a red line slashed across it, and wears black jeans with simple boots. All over his clothes and up to the back of his heads are long thick bendable metals that when he needs to calls his armor out and it folds out. The armor is grey and sharp looking, it has red glowing slits where his eyes look out, and has black lines going across the edges of the armor, it is nearly skin night but isn?t fully. (I hope to get a picture to further show)

Personality: Vex is a very reclusive man, who doesn?t talk to many people unless they were part of his job. But when he does speak he is respectful of that person and is fairly kind. But when pushed too far can get very angry and violent, but rarely happens.

Alignment: Hero, mixture of an Anti-Hero and Neutral, but never evil.

Superpowers: Doesn?t have any powers, but is highly knowledgeable with tech and weapons. He wields various guns which (thinks Mass Effect) fold out when his armor does. Thus he can carry many guns for an assortment of jobs. On his back he carries a large broad sword, and a shield. His armor which makes him stronger, allows him to use the sword one handed with the shield as if the sword was one-handed. The armor called Zero-V is the fifth version of his armor that is still in the testing stages and gives him a much needed boost in armor against super powered foes. Lastly he has the ability to have small beams of light use as blades on his gauntlet, but is still being tested and can?t be used for very long.

Weaknesses: The armor is tough on him, using it for too long can result in severe injuries and stress to his bones and muscles. It also doesn?t have the greatest defense against super powers because he mainly does jobs against un-super powered enemies.

Biography: Vex was born in New York to a decent middle-class family, when on to a trip to Japan when he was seven, his family was killed by Yakuza for reasons unknown to him. Alone with no one else to go to, he began to train and research, thus learning how to kill. In his early years he attempted to take part in school in Japan to get some sense of a normal life after. While he tried to make things work, he couldn?t hide his rage, and distanced himself from everyone and eventually dropped out.

When he was sixteen he finally was able to get information on the Yakuza, its name was the Broken Star, and it had ties to his family who were developing weapons for them to use to destroy the rival Yakuza families. Further research he discovered why his family did such and he wasn?t too fond of what he learned which distorted his views on his family. His parents who he believed were good were just the opposite and downright evil. They had been working with various groups all of across the world developing weapons that were more advanced than anything out on the black market. Apparently it was something about their ideology to change the world, but he couldn?t understand it.

Eventually when he was seventeen, he struck, despite feeling heavily disappointed by his parents and family, still wanted revenge. Finding the family head?s home, in the middle of the night he busted down the doors and went on a rampage killing everyone and everything inside the home. The head of the family tried to beg for mercy but Vex gave him none such, it was there underneath the house he found it. The first suit, the Zero-I, it was still in early construction but he took it anyway and with his knowledge began to upgrade it and continue building upon it.

Then after knowing there was no going back, Vex left Japan and began to travel the world as a mercenary for hire, but he didn?t forget his morals, and bowed to never do a job that would harm innocents or good people, only those who were truly evil. Over the years he fought against many foes some normal and others with powers, but he always came out on top, albeit sometimes nearly killed himself. Now at the age of twenty-one he returns to New York.

Hope you like it. :) If I need to edit, I can.
 

Lambi

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[HEADING=2]Attention, everyone:[/HEADING]​

I will not be giving any more judgments. Anything I've said up until now stands. I'll wait until either Friday, or until I have enough sheets, then I'll start accepting people. Until then, no further judgments.
 

Korten12

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Lambi said:
[HEADING=2]Attention, everyone:[/HEADING]​

I will not be giving any more judgments. Anything I've said up until now stands. I'll wait until either Friday, or until I have enough sheets, then I'll start accepting people. Until then, no further judgments.
But... What if someone doesn't know if their's need to be edited and gets not accepted because of it?
 

Lambi

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Korten12 said:
Lambi said:
[HEADING=2]Attention, everyone:[/HEADING]​

I will not be giving any more judgments. Anything I've said up until now stands. I'll wait until either Friday, or until I have enough sheets, then I'll start accepting people. Until then, no further judgments.
But... What if someone doesn't know if their's need to be edited and gets not accepted because of it?
Then you know what not to do in the next RP you join.
 

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Lambi said:
Korten12 said:
Lambi said:
[HEADING=2]Attention, everyone:[/HEADING]​

I will not be giving any more judgments. Anything I've said up until now stands. I'll wait until either Friday, or until I have enough sheets, then I'll start accepting people. Until then, no further judgments.
But... What if someone doesn't know if their's need to be edited and gets not accepted because of it?
Then you know what not to do in the next RP you join.
Dude. That's kind of an assholish thing to say. I was considering joining but your attitude towards everyone is not attractive. You really need to be more kind to the people taking time out of their day to apply.
 

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Lambi said:
I'm going to start on telling my opinions on some sheets right now. Be patient, I'll get to your sheet if you don't see it here.
All I'm saying, bro, is be careful with your promises. ;)
 

TheIronRuler

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Here's a revised version of my sheet.
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Name: Manny Rodriguez

Alias: El Cid

Gender: Male

Age: 29

Appearance: Manny stands at 1.7 meters and weighs approx. 80 kgs. He has broad shoulders and a square jaw resting on a short neck. His dark hair is cut short, his eyes are brown, and his borderline unappealing hairiness forces him to shave once a day or suffer a short beard by the end of the week. He has a tanned skin covering a visibly muscular body. He usually wears his work clothes - blue overalls, and black Nike shoe he found at a locker-room one day. Otherwise he would wear one of his black t-shirts under a white undershirt with short grey or brown trousers. He wore a golden mask when he was starting out, but nowadays a proper change of clothes and a shaved chin fools most of the eye witnesses.

Personality: Manny is a hothead. He usually jumps into a situation head-first and is easily provoked. He protects his dearest friends and family fiercely and considers them the most important thing in his life. Manny is deeply religious, and as a catholic he respects clergymen and the word of the pope. He attends Mass and goes on to confessing his sins to his priest frequently. He's naïve and his world view parts the world into two sides ? sinners and saints, black and white. This hurts him most when dealing with situations were neither is clear, sometimes an issue that leads to unfortunate consequences. He's sociable, outgoing and loud. He changes completely in the presence of people he respects, like his family and his priest, becoming quiet and calm.

Alignment: Superhero.

Superpowers: (Due to an accident) Broken brain chemistry which allows for Manny to have inhuman reflexes (and increased speeds) when his heart rate is very high. This power can be useful and switched into gear after a short time of effort, but staying with said power turned on for too long burdens Manny's heart. If he pushes too far his heart might just explode in his chest, while health issues related to his heart do haunt his everyday life because of that power.

Unnaturally hardened bones(capable of surviving hits, make his physical attacks stronger).

Weaknesses: Manny is a hot-head. He's a danger to himself and sometimes others around him and would gladly jup in a fight without thinking. This also makes his power spontaniously pop up when he doesn't need to, a habbit he had been trying to fight since his first heart attack at the age of 26.

Manny is deeply religious and follows the church's decrees. He views the world in black and white and has trouble in dealing with some people he can't label.

Manny is susceptible to all natural weapons including firearms, though his bones almost never break.

He cares for his close family and friends dearly, and would protect them whatever it takes.

Manny sees good people as those he needs to protect and bad as those he needs to vanquish. This sometimes outs him in an awkward position when he has to choose between the two. He usually goes for saving the good.

Biography: Manny was born to a single Mexican illegal immigrant working in Arizona in a small town. She was a maid at the town's only motel and would have her and Manny live in that motel. Manny grew up in a poor home. Manny was dropped by his mother as a child, sustaining a blow to the head. The doctors managed to save him after a lot of work, but they were baffled when Manny appeared to be perfectly healthy. The impact did not break his skull as they had expected due to his hardened bones, but it did turn shatter some items in his brain. From there on, Manny had suffered trouble with his heart, accompanied by a strange sensation when he gets overexcited or in a bad situation. As he grew older he learned more about using this weird phenomenon only he has, all the while receiving worrying chest pains at such an early age.

Manny used to spend most of his time playing catch, fighting other children and riding his bicycle around town (One that he doesn't even own). He would frequently get injured but he never did need to be hospitalized once, something that helped his mother's poor financial situation. His way of life continued till his third year of high-school where the school's principal was close to expelling him. A senior teacher advised the principal to give Manny another chance, and so he did. That was the gym teacher, and as both knew a week after that talk he was talking rubbish. The gym teacher had wanted to start a boxing team in the school for years, and he had been eyeing Manny for that very reason. Manny had to do his coach's bidding and try to recruit his more lively and violent friends into the team, an act that, after almost a year of training, catapulted the team of young boys into the national stage. The strange phenomenon he had encountered during his childhood became a prized possession in his fighting matches, and Manny led the team to victory. That attracted attention to the boy and his illegal status, but his excellence in sports and surprisingly impeccable record allowed the state to grant him his USA citizenship.

Manny had a younger sister he loved and protected from local boys that feared his wrath. When he got older, Manny got more into boxing while his injuries seemed to have little effect on him besides internal bleeding, cuts and bruises. His fists were also notoriously deadly as he later found out his knuckles were naturally stronger than the other fighters. As he progressed, Manny became more distant from his friends and family and dabbled more in matters of his career. When a funeral of his good friend called him to visit home he decided that his carrier mattered less than being with his loved ones. Manny had taken a job in the old school he used to be in as a janitor, though he sometimes drives to the big city and does a boxing match or two for sports and a decent payday.

He had lived that way for the past four years, though recurring visits to the city's underbelly made the man feel wring whenever he entered the city. After consulting with his priest he believed that he should work towards a better society and try to show those lost souls the path of Christ and help them off the street. That resolution ended badly as he was stabbed twice in a fight against three men armed with knives, a fight that also ended in their demise. Even though he was first charged with manslaughter, the charges were dropped after two weeks when police found the case to be simply an act of self defense. It was then that Manny knew he had to help those people another way and that he had to keep his identity a secret. He wore a silver mask common with Mexican wrestling and ran around the streets of the city literally stopping crime. After each encounter he would come to his priest back at his home town for confessing his sins and if necessary, tending to his wounds.

He learned of the consequences of his powers after he had his first heart attack at the age of 26. Ever since he had been trying to use that power as little as possible, though when push comes to shove Manny knows when to strike back, and strike hard.

Other notes: He's bi-lingual with Spanish and English. The nickname he gave himself reminds him of an old tale he heard from his mother when he was a child, but know he doesn't remember what the name means.