Poll: Future Comic test

[Aldan9]

I'll have you know I've never attempted anything of this sort before but I'm somewhat above average at drawing and bored enough to want to make a comic.

 

[TheNumber1Zero]

Sorta funny I guess, but you could have done better.

Although Love is about to hurt in a minute, because that Train isn't going to stop in time

 

[Aldan9]

Not to be rude but I don't get what's going on... This is what classifies as above average drawing?

This was done in 10 minutes or so I wanna start a comic with this dude fighting or opposing every inanimate and non-sentient thing possible. I just wanted to check if the concept would work and if investing time and braincells into it would be of any use. The quality I can improve a lot, given the proper time.