Poll: How do you prefer stories to begin?

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Jewrean

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I'm writing a novel (in this case a Science-Fiction with post-apocalyptic elements and various warring factions) and I was wondering what you guys/girls consider to be the most intriguing way to open a book/movie/story. You don't need to read books or watch movies so long as you know what you like when it comes to how these things start off. I have added a poll with the options of Action, Dialogue, Prose, and other. All of your opinions are relevant no matter how biased or educated you are. After-all, for the opener (the thing that either gets my book published or it doesn't) needs to be fantastic and what better way then to start things off in a method that works?
 

drbarno

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Action, but so long as the story dosen't take too long to develop I'm not really bothered
 
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Action that drops you straight in or 'in something something'... where it starts with the ending or with less information and it's slowly revealed during the story.

Someone will probably be along to quote me with the correct name pretty soonish.
 

Jedamethis

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"Once upon a time..."

I can't help but start all of my stories with it...
I don't know why.

But I guess I prefer them to start with prose.
 

rob_simple

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I like when a story starts with a scene from later on in the book; something that only starts to make sense as you read on. I actually like it more when I've forgotten all about the start and it only occurs to me when I get to the part of the book where it's relevant.
 

Jewrean

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Perhaps I should have a Synopsis at the beginning of the book which details some key elements about the state of the world without mentioning anything about characters and such... then lead in with a balls to the wall action scene... Yes?
 

Mukil

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I usually start mine at the end. If people like it then they can turn the page and read it from teh start.
 

Slash Dementia

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I prefer dialog when it comes to science fiction, it helps me get the feel of it since I'm not that into the genre of stories; or maybe a narration by one of the main characters.
If it were a fantasy (which it's not), I'd say action, since it just pushes me into the book and gets me reading.
 

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This is a difficult one. I think what you gotta remember is that the opening will set the tone for the whole book. If your book is going to be action oriented that's what you've gotta start with. Action books are a series of climaxes tied together or provoked by plot. Good action novels tend to start with a small climax that introduces characters and end with a big climax that ties up the ends. I'm gonna point at books by Matthew Reilly, Robert Ludlum and John Birmingham. Someone (often multiple someones) always gets gunned, blown up or eaten in the first few pages.

On the other hand if your book is more plot, character or dialogue driven, then this is what you begin with. I'll point to John Le Carre in this case. He spends the first few pages establishing characters, motives, plot and context. 'The Spy Who Came in From the Cold' and 'Call for the Dead' are prime examples of this.

I'm guessing (given the context you described) that it's gonna be more action based (see above). If it's a mixture of both, I'd suggest reading authors like Cormac Mccarthy, famous for 'the Road' and 'No Country for Old Men', but I'd recommend you'd be better off checking out 'Blood Meridian', a western, but it has some gruesome action (the scalping scenes are poetically detailed), incredible characters and multifactional conflict (though it can be difficult to read). Another good author is Michael Ondaatje, and his books; 'The Enlgish Patient', 'In the Skin of a Lion' (prequel to the former, should be read first, fantastic book) and 'The Collected Works of Jessy James' (I believe that's the title).
 

SomeLameStuff

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"post-apocalyptic elements and various warring factions" eh?

You could be like me and write a prologue explaining the situation in the world, example:

"It is the thirty-first century, and mankind, is once again, at war. The battlefields of the future are dominated by huge robotic war machines known as BattleMechs."*

Something like that.

Then at the end of the prologue insert this line in a new paragraph:

"Welcome to the future"

That's how I usually write my sci-fi future stuff anyways.

*cookie if you know where that is from.
 

Extraintrovert

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Since deadman91 probably already said everything intelligent on the matter, I'll simply state that I prefer dialogue at the beginning of a story, as it introduces some of the characters (almost always my favourite part of any work of fiction) while giving some detail on the current situation, enough to attract my interest but not enough to explain everything immediately.
 

leady129

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The opening of any story should make it clear almost by the end of the first page which fictional universe the story is taking place in and the rules of said universe. In your case, if your using post apocalyptic elements, a suitable opening could either give a general overview of the war which lead to this situation, or you could hone in on a specific, important battle, although the later option would generally then ask you to use this battle later on in the story as part of one of the character's arcs.

Having said that, when it comes to science fiction, I personally tend to prefer it if the opening doesn't jump straight into this blood soaked history and instead reveals it slowly throughout the story, really integrating it's importance in the universe and how its affecting your characters decisions.

Do you mind if I ask for a general synopsis?
 

Arcanite Ripper

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I've always been a big fan of Prose's to set "that right mood", though I like to think to truely hit you mark, it's all dependent on the type of settings, styles and character personalities that dignify the story. As far as "Scinece-Fiction with post-apocolyptic elements and warring factions", i'm thinking all of the different aesthetics that could happen between Mad Max and Seventh Seal.

If you could spoil me for a moment and have some sort of "rough copy" available, I wouldn't mind hearing reading a short piece of what you may have so far. I'm getting myself a little interested.
 

Toranilor

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I'd say start with the protagonist, just doing an ambigous yet still relevant action. For example, the start (excluding the prologue) of the wheel of time series (Protagonist walking through snow with father, with cart). It allows the reader to identify with the protagonist, maybe find out a bit about their character, while speculating about the world at large. It could also create a sense of wonder and intrigue within the viewer about the world you're writing about, and gives them a character to experience it with, making them want to read on.

Or at least, that was the case for me.
 

Jewrean

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deadman91 said:
This is a difficult one. I think what you gotta remember is that the opening will set the tone for the whole book. If your book is going to be action oriented that's what you've gotta start with. Action books are a series of climaxes tied together or provoked by plot. Good action novels tend to start with a small climax that introduces characters and end with a big climax that ties up the ends. I'm gonna point at books by Matthew Reilly, Robert Ludlum and John Birmingham. Someone (often multiple someones) always gets gunned, blown up or eaten in the first few pages.

On the other hand if your book is more plot, character or dialogue driven, then this is what you begin with. I'll point to John Le Carre in this case. He spends the first few pages establishing characters, motives, plot and context. 'The Spy Who Came in From the Cold' and 'Call for the Dead' are prime examples of this.

I'm guessing (given the context you described) that it's gonna be more action based (see above). If it's a mixture of both, I'd suggest reading authors like Cormac Mccarthy, famous for 'the Road' and 'No Country for Old Men', but I'd recommend you'd be better off checking out 'Blood Meridian', a western, but it has some gruesome action (the scalping scenes are poetically detailed), incredible characters and multifactional conflict (though it can be difficult to read). Another good author is Michael Ondaatje, and his books; 'The Enlgish Patient', 'In the Skin of a Lion' (prequel to the former, should be read first, fantastic book) and 'The Collected Works of Jessy James' (I believe that's the title).
Thankyou for this wonderfully detailed reply and I look forward to trying out some of your suggestions.

dathwampeer said:
Depends entirely on the story.
This is true. I suppose it's entirely possible that I write whatever comes to mind and figure out the start of the book once I'm done... lol. I could write more about the concept if you wanted because I really need all the advice I can get on this.
 

Chogg Van Helsing

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Well, I'm writing a novel, and it opens with a couple of pages explaining what has previously happened, but in a gripping way lol.

EDIT: I hope...
 

Daipire

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"So I was about to have an intimate time with my lady-friend, when an alligator burst through the window, and although I was already naked, I decided to..."

Action, I dare you to tell me you don't want to hear the rest of that story :D
 

Jewrean

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leady129 said:
Do you mind if I ask for a general synopsis?
Not at all. Although it isn't a great description as of yet.

There is a planet (you are not told whether it is Earth or not) and it is covered by a large desert which the inhabitants of said planet assumed was from a great war. Ancient ruins still stand including entire cities and sewer systems. Mutations have spread such as incredibly large insect-like creatures or even the development of special abilities in the people (think X-men mutant sort of powers) which people believe is from the resulting fallout. The majority of the population of this planet have simply been killed. The technologies of the past have been long forgotten and 3 new warring factions have risen from the ashes of the old world. It is literally a gender war between Men and Women. The third faction are the left over civilians that roam the desert like nomads. These civilians are poached, captured, murdered, and used as converts in the gender war. Both factions are led by tyrannical psychopathic Matriarch/Patriarchs that have used discovered technology from the old world to brainwash people into doing their bidding. It isn't exactly explained how the war began between the two factions and there is an inherent plot twist based on this. The main character is a rebel nomad with a unique teleportation ability. He manages to capture a female dominion soldier and use her as a hostage. However the two quickly come to understand one another and even fall in love. Eventually the rebel and his hostage are captured by the female dominion who have now taken great interest in his abilities. They plan to use him to destroy the opposing faction.

So erm... that's a BASIC overview... there's still a tonne of stuff I haven't covered...

lol COPYRIGHT and incredibly loosely based on a PC game from 1990.
 

konor77

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I like my novels to open with something related to the story but doesn't involve the main charecters to establishe setting and mood.