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sms_117b

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look at the above picture for me, it's not quite finished but I want to see if it works, plus want feedback about how to make it better.

Edit: After feedback please have a look at post 16 and rate that one from now on, thank you.
 

sky14kemea

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damn, it worked on me
it'll probably only work on people that watch futurama though XD
 

Flying-Emu

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I watch Futurama, and I can honestly say that I didn't even giggle at this.

The gag just didn't work for me.
 

Avatar Roku

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That was supposed to be funny? I just thought you were making a new avatar until I saw people's responses.
 

Nexus424

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Huh that's weird. Damn that worked. I watched way too much Futurama. Not like that's a bad thing.
 

sms_117b

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Flying-Emu said:
I watch Futurama, and I can honestly say that I didn't even giggle at this.

The gag just didn't work for me.
Fair enough.

orannis62 said:
That was supposed to be funny? I just thought you were making a new avatar until I saw people's responses.
It was, but, no joke works on everyone 100% of the time.
 

TMAN10112

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Wow, that really works.


My suggestions:
-Use a picture of the professor while he saying "Good news everone!"
-Move "Good news everyone!" into a speech bubble, put it where it will be noticed first.
-That is all.
 

deranged_muppet

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TMAN10112 said:
Wow, that really works.


My suggestions:
-Use a picture of the professor while he saying "Good news everone!"
-Move "Good news everyone!" into a speech bubble, put it where it will be noticed first.
-That is all.
"Good new everyone" came to mind when i read that, not really with the one in the picutre :/
 

Gxas

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I must say that I watch Futurama and have no idea what the professor sounds like...
 

ManiacalZManiac

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TMAN10112 said:
Wow, that really works.


My suggestions:
-Use a picture of the professor while he saying "Good news everone!"
-Move "Good news everyone!" into a speech bubble, put it where it will be noticed first.
-That is all.
For some reason, I added "Good News Everyone" on my own. Completely involuntary. 0_o
 

Anarchemitis

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This was posted by one of the moderators on the Warcry forums.
I laughed, so he stole my laughs for you.
 

sms_117b

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ManiacalZManiac said:
For some reason, I added "Good News Everyone" on my own. Completely involuntary. 0_o
TMAN10112 said:
Wow, that really works.

My suggestions:
-Use a picture of the professor while he saying "Good news everone!"
-Move "Good news everyone!" into a speech bubble, put it where it will be noticed first.
-That is all.
deranged_muppet said:
"Good new everyone" came to mind when i read that, not really with the one in the picutre :/
How about this one?


Edit: By the way, thanks for the feedback people :)
 

sms_117b

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Gormourn said:
You've got a typo there >_<

And I think the original one was better. Perhaps if Good News Everyone was in different colour, it'd draw attention better. Black colour would work better.
Where?!?! I've been looking for 5 minutes, I'll have a new version up a bit later.

Edit: About now...

 

deranged_muppet

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sms_117b said:
Gormourn said:
You've got a typo there >_<

And I think the original one was better. Perhaps if Good News Everyone was in different colour, it'd draw attention better. Black colour would work better.
Where?!?! I've been looking for 5 minutes, I'll have a new version up a bit later.

Edit: About now...

Haha yeah, that one worked