Poll: So What do you Think?

[interspark]

so i just started a web comic series and i think its pretty good, but then again i AM looking at this through "this is something i made" goggles so im quite curious as to what others think, the link is below. and yes, some may call this blatent advertism, i call it field research

www.interspark.smackjeeves.com

yeah sorry, apparently you have to copy and paste it into the URL bar

 

[The Maddest March Hare]

Eek advertising, this won't go down too well.

About the webcomic, I liked the humour, but it's too long winded. By the time I got to the punchline I was losing interest. Comics work best if you keep things short and sweet.

Also, maybe use a different program for the artwork, I'd suggest something like Inkscape, it's free and awesome, and as a vector tool it won't create pixellated art like that.

It has potential, so don't give up on it. And here and there it got a laugh, so it's certainly on the right track. Good start overall, much room for improvement.

 

[AvsJoe]

No ads on the forums.

Opinion: It has its moments. The engine room and giant oven comics got a laugh out of me.

 

[LavaLampBamboo]

I'll be interested to see how your art style develops over time. Some potential in the writing, keep it up and prepare to take some criticism, but stick it out =)