Poll: Student Union Champions!

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Student Union Champions

A new web comic about the ups and downs and reach-arounds of the Audio-Visual Department. My experience as a full-fledged, part-time A-V scrub, as well as vampires, aliens, and vampire-aliens. Check it out and tell me what you think, pretty please...

Why would I advertise on gamer-forum, because I... AM A WHORE!!! Now read!!! Love you!!!

http://studentunionchampions.comicgenesis.com
 
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It's decent.
Although, there were no vampires, aliens, or vampire-aliens.
I was lied to.
 
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Glerken said:
It's decent.
Although, there were no vampires, aliens, or vampire-aliens.
I was lied to.
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The vampires and aliens and vampire-aliens are implied in the subtext. If you beleive in them, you'll see them... Actually, they'll be there soon, it's brand new, gimmie a break :( since when were whores suppose to tell the truth...
 
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julesville said:
Glerken said:
It's decent.
Although, there were no vampires, aliens, or vampire-aliens.
I was lied to.
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The vampires and aliens and vampire-aliens are implied in the subtext. If you beleive in them, you'll see them... Actually, they'll be there soon, it's brand new, gimmie a break :( since when were whores suppose to tell the truth...
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I'm not saying it's bad. Better than a lot of all those webcomic strips out there.
Add in the vampires, aliens, and vampire-aliens and it will be better.
And you never really introduced the main character or his friend.
 
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Glerken said:
julesville said:
Glerken said:
It's decent.
Although, there were no vampires, aliens, or vampire-aliens.
I was lied to.
Click to expand...
The vampires and aliens and vampire-aliens are implied in the subtext. If you beleive in them, you'll see them... Actually, they'll be there soon, it's brand new, gimmie a break :( since when were whores suppose to tell the truth...
Click to expand...
I'm not saying it's bad. Better than a lot of all those webcomic strips out there.
Add in the vampires, aliens, and vampire-aliens and it will be better.
And you never really introduced the main character or his friend.
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I appreciate people just paying attention to me, but thanks. I was going the route of jump right into the goings-ons of the comic world, and subtly over time reveal things about the characters. I dunno, I guess I was trying to be cool and artistic.
 
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Wait! I do introduce them. In the 2nd strip, he refers to himself as Hal. And in the 3rd strip the hippie referres to the two as Hal and Wil. Using deductive logic, we can assume the other one is Wil.

Also, in the 4th strip, UPDATED TODAY!!!, a whole bunch of names are used haphazzardly. Many of the characters who we been introduced make their first "appearance" in that strip.
 
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The CG site is back up and updating

Go there http://studentunionchampions.comicgenesis.com

2 new comics updated on the 5th and the 7th (though not really on the 5th, more of a back-up, time loop, paradox thing)
 
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LimaBravo said:
The art could go somewhere interesting but the characters arent really my thing. For example Timpany and Morrigan, whats next Alisdair and Farquhar ?
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Don't forget Halcyon and Wilfredo! Yeah... I just kinda wanted to make weird names...
 
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How has no one pointed out the blatant advertising this thread is? I mean come one normally we'd have 20 people coming in and saying, "report and move on" or "don't advertise" or something to one of those two effects.

but seriously, leave, I hate people who advertise here.
 
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Its alright, some funny stuff in there, especially as I have done the odd job working for my student's union (mostly just openday temp work, but have mates who are full-time) but I find the artwork distracts from the writing in a bad way.

Perhaps simplify it a bit (Little Gamers for example, very simple, but nice to look at, so it helps reading the the panels) or get someone to help do the artwork. Doing it in flash can help give it a smoother appearence. Its just little things that look odd. You have block colour for most of it, but then gradient colour on hair. Also, consider fading the background a bit (opasity wise) to make the foreground the focal point.

What program(s) are you using to do the artwork with?

black lincon said:
How has no one pointed out the blatant advertising this thread is? I mean come one normally we'd have 20 people coming in and saying, "report and move on" or "don't advertise" or something to one of those two effects.

but seriously, leave, I hate people who advertise here.
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maybe everyones just in a good mood today? ;)
 
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WolfLordAndy said:
black lincon said:
How has no one pointed out the blatant advertising this thread is? I mean come one normally we'd have 20 people coming in and saying, "report and move on" or "don't advertise" or something to one of those two effects.

but seriously, leave, I hate people who advertise here.
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maybe everyones just in a good mood today? ;)
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Oh you sir are a funny man, the fine members of this site never have a good day, well not the people who would normally do what I said.
 
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The artwork was poor, To much text was in each panel, the characters were bland and the jokes where not funny. Most webcomics are bad at first, just persist in making them and I am sure you will improve. Summary, garbage, with potential.
 
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