SckizoBoy said:
Yeah, that's what I'm referring to... it used to be fairly commonplace, but it's difficult to find a contemporarily written book in which one character speaks continuously for more than a few hundred words whether it is to an in story audience or just to a companion... it makes historical novels (read: Classical Antiquity) written in the last twenty years very difficult for me to enjoy primarily because one of the reasons for being known was oratory skill, and yet I'm not seeing the charisma... :/
But that got me thinking that the art of public speaking is largely lost as far as spontaneity is concerned since there is no speech that is not written and edited half a million times over... and yet commentators will find several holes in it for sources of criticism. (Just an aside...)
Eh, just a change in narrative style I suppose. That's why they're "contemporary"--they don't follow all of the conventions of the past. I imagine writers avoid speeches like that because they can seem fake and unengaging, at least without stopping every now and then to show physical actions like audience reaction, hand gestures, stuff happening with the setting, etc. I feel that way reading Shakespeare--yes, what's written is awesome and all, but in my mind I simply can't comprehend why they'd let such a windbag go on and on unquestioned. And yes I understand Shakespeare is meant to be enjoyed theatrically where you can see the character acting as well, but still. Nobody lets somebody go on and on for 500 words, let's somebody else respond with 700 words, and then closes with another 500 words. And the same with things like the Scarlet Letter. I think the only reason their dialog goes on for so long is because the conventions of speech at the time necessitated it.
And yes there are people who can just pull a great speech out of their ass, but I think it's safe to say even Martin Luther King Jr. started with an idea, wrote it down, and edited to get just the right flow before he actually read it out. You probably won't find a preacher on this earth that just stands up at the pulpit and wings it. Whether or not you realize it, great speeches
do require scripting and editing to make them great. Again, there are those select few who under the right circumstances can string those thoughts together well. But it doesn't happen very often, and certainly not as often as a well-edited speech strings thoughts together perfectly. There is an element of improvisation and presentation in there, working with the mood of the audience and all. But for the most part that sort of confidence to improvise can only come from a very well planned script.