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Achievement Unlocked is just a parody game. The programmer did an eh job. But yet again, maybe that was his point
Very good review; I don't anything about these games, but you were thorough and concise about these games. You have a good handle on words and pacing, so that's good too. Keep it up.
I did something like this [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.81763] when I started reviewing, and while short reviews are less stressful and more fun to pump out, they're not really interesting nor fun to read. I'd suggest reviewing something in full (preferably not a browser game) just so others can see where you stand as a reviewer.
If I were to criticize you for this topic, I'd say that you really need to work on punctuation. Evaluate your uses (and lack thereof) of colons, periods, and especially commas. Read everything once without any punctuation, then put the appropriate symbol in locations a pause seems necessary. If you've completed a thought, that's usually a period (though sometimes you can justify the use of a semicolon).
If I were to criticize you for this topic, I'd say that you really need to work on punctuation. Evaluate your uses (and lack thereof) of colons, periods, and especially commas. Read everything once without any punctuation, then put the appropriate symbol in locations a pause seems necessary. If you've completed a thought, that's usually a period (though sometimes you can justify the use of a semicolon).