Ok, some critique.
In the first skit, the setup took way too long to get to the punchline. If you wanted to make it a good parody, should have just done a top 5 and THEN get to the comments section. Plus, that would have made the #1 spot a little more funny cause you would have gotten to it a bit faster. I completely realize it was a parody of a list show but it didn't come off as one till the end. You could have fleshed it out a little more.
The second throwaway skit, a little better than last week. Almost seems like it could have been drawn out more to give the characters a little more depth for added humor.
The 3rd skit, I hope this isn't a look into your future. I honestly don't see what's so funny about losing your job and getting a pink slip in a game box. The skit felt phoned in and never really panned out.
I agree with previous posters. I foresee this show getting canned in the near future.
In the first skit, the setup took way too long to get to the punchline. If you wanted to make it a good parody, should have just done a top 5 and THEN get to the comments section. Plus, that would have made the #1 spot a little more funny cause you would have gotten to it a bit faster. I completely realize it was a parody of a list show but it didn't come off as one till the end. You could have fleshed it out a little more.
The second throwaway skit, a little better than last week. Almost seems like it could have been drawn out more to give the characters a little more depth for added humor.
The 3rd skit, I hope this isn't a look into your future. I honestly don't see what's so funny about losing your job and getting a pink slip in a game box. The skit felt phoned in and never really panned out.
I agree with previous posters. I foresee this show getting canned in the near future.