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Fniff

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Are you a writer? Write a paragraph of the scariest things you can imagine!

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It moved. It kinda folded out into a cross between a large spider and a fly. It didn't have any pupils. You didn't know whether it was looking at you or anything else. I almost couldn't take the horror that lay before me. I looked away,but I knew that wouldn't help. It was there,and it wasn't going to leave empty handed.

That was bad but I'm sure you can do better!
 

Azraellod

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Well, I don't think that's the problem really. I'm quite capable of putting down some scary writing, but 1 paragraph? I'd need some sort of context to do it in, and I tend to go way over 1 paragraph if I'm trying to do that.
 

Disaster Button

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Fniff said:
Are you a writer? Write a paragraph of the scariest things you can imagine!

Example:

It moved. It kinda folded out into a cross between a large spider and a fly. It didn't have any pupils. You didn't know whether it was looking at you or anything else. I almost couldn't take the horror that lay before me. I looked away,but I knew that wouldn't help. It was there,and it wasn't going to leave empty handed.

That was bad but I'm sure you can do better!
She loves me I know it. Even as she struggles against me, twists, kicks at me as I pin her to the ground. She loves me. "I hate you!" She screams and spits into my face. I smile, and lick at where she spat, then wink at her, she always loved when I played seductively she used to giggle. Now she cries and shrieks. "I hate you, I hate you!" She sobs as I kiss at her neck lovingly. "I don't believe you" I reply softly, knowing she loves me, how couldn't she? She tries to headbutt me, but I grab her head, feeling her soft brown hair, and smash it into the wood flooring. A look of pain flickers across her face which quickly turns blank. She stares at me no longer struggling. I look at her sympathetically and kiss her forehead. "All better, see?" I stroke the hair out of her eyes as she still watches me, her eyes never moving. "I'm sorry. I love you" I tell her as I kiss her soft, pale, lips.

Maybe not scary, but a bit twisted perhaps.
 

TheSentinel

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It was long. Not just long, but thin. And tall. It had some semblance of limbs, but they were mockeries of that of a human. Its elongated fingers, bloodstained and burned, reached out. The tips of the fingers held no nails, nor claws. Simply pointed flesh. The feet lacked any definition. No toes. No anything. It had the slightest semblance of a face. slits for a nose, slight indentations where eyes would rest, and no form of mouth. No body cover for this being. It looked as if it was created by something which had only periphery knowledge of humans, and just filled in the blanks itself.
 

Lost In The Void

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The Friend Inside My Head
Alone, and inside I cry for you
Your answer with a sense of uncertainty
Is it right? Is it right? Is it right for us to be together?
I say yes, and you say no
I beg for yes, but you firmly state a no
I cry for yes, and your tears always say no;
They always say no

I cry to him, the friend inside of me
He's always there to make it right for me
You cut me, and you hurt me, burned at the pyre
My friend speaks to me
You're going to pay for this, I promise you

You turn away, afraid to say
What you're really saying
I close my eyes, touch your face
Try to imagine us being alone
Being alone for ever
I can't see it, I won't see it
We're together whether you want it or not

I cry to him, the friend inside of me
He's always there to make it right for me
You cut me, and you hurt me, burned at the pyre
My friend speaks to me
You're going to pay for this, I promise you
Lost in the Sounds of Life
Flip on the news, hear the blues
Of a Terrible world all dazed and confused
Lost souls who wander the world in search of the truth
Find nothing put pain and suffering
Why do they try, for trying is failure?
Just waiting to happen

A quiet man about to lose
The love of his life through and through
A bleeding heart, which bleeds for her
Tear out the weakness, present it to her
His eyes burning and soul imploding
Upon a face he wishes to see but won't

The man and his son alone in a field
Baseball and fun, for the man and his son
"Hey Daddy what's that?"
Nothing but a scream and forgotten face.
A man and his son, buried in a field




The women see's her date, what a man
Blonde tall and handsome what more could she want
Something will happen tonight, no matter what she thinks
A seed born inside a woman too young
Another young bastard brought into the world
No one will want him cast out and alone
He cries for his daddy though he will always be without one

Both sort of rough copies of stuff I write when I'm bored
 

AvsJoe

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There are many diseases out there that rot your body from the inside out. One such disease is gaining popularity in Africa right now and another different strain has been reported in Singapore. Should the diseases not be quarantined, we will face an epidemic not seen since the Dark Ages.

Note: this is scary because it's probably true.

Also: this thread reminds me of the new XKCD comic: