Some constructive criticism, please?

[Aerosteam]

The camera was slightly shaky at the start, some zombie movements didn't look that terrifying and that beard should never be shaved.

Hope that helps.

Also, what he said. That guy below me. He is right.

 

[Jonluw]

The mods will probably give you a hammering for this, dude.
Advertising isn't allowed, and the definition used is sort of broad.

 

[aba1]

You desperately need a tripod the camera shakes even in shots that don't involve camera movement. Also the make-up on the actors is inconsistent. Around the 2 min mark when the protagonist uses his watch he is standing still despite the fact he is running. You should also adjust the colouring on the footage everything feels very raw and unpolished. Around the 2:30 mark you hear the wind in the mic but you cannot hear anything else so you might as well cut the sound since all you hear is generally the music anyways when that issue occurs. Lastly the song was really exciting but zombies are a horror thing so I really had no idea what you were going for but that is more of a creative choice so it isn't really wrong.

The angles and pacing used were strong and the watch effect was fairly solid. The actors were decent and choreography was good.

 

[clipse15]

You have some okay shot composition and your editing is ok but this is really unpolished and rough. You have sections where the light blows out completely like in the shot where he opens up the curtain. You also cannot have people running from one side of the screen and in the next shot have them running from the other side. That's a huge faux pas. The music doesn't really match the tone either

 

[King of Asgaard]

As others have said, needs more polish. Also less dubstep, but that's a subjective opinion.
The zombies didn't act like zombies; zombies don't jump and use their hands to help them over obstacles. Their make-up was rather all over the place, too.
Don't use shaky cam, get a tripod or something.
The slow-mo is a bit clichéd, maybe try it elsewhere, or just don't use it at all.

 

[RipRoaringWaterfowl]

I will recommend a tripod. Try and fine one that can be ajusted to different heights. I also recommend that, if you can, get a second tripod that has wheels, or at least a single adjustable tripod with removable/reattachable wheels.

 

[Froggy Slayer]

Thanks for the feedback guys! We'll be sure to act on your criticism. We didn't have that much stuff when we were filming this, but we're working on getting some more equipment.