I was bored so I just tried to describe that scene in Modern Warfare.
I fluttered my eyes open, and immediately shut them. Sand was blowing, and it stung when it flew into my face. I crawled forward on my front, feeling the skin shedding on my already bloody chest, and I could no longer feel my legs. My arms were flaming with pain, and I moved at a slow and agonizing crawl. My face felt horrible, and blood had caked my forehead. The corpses of my comrades lay beside me, and as I reached the rear of the helicopter, a mortifying sight was spread out in front of me, like a scene from a sci-fi movie.
The world was gone. Obliterated, it seemed. I saw the world through what seemed like a screen of sepia and blood. Buildings had toppled, and a mushroom cloud rose in the distance. I fell out of the back of the heli, and a raw blinding flash of pain seared through my body. I grunted, my throat not able to produce the scream of horror I wanted to. It was a hoarse and horrible sound, and hearing it made me want to scream even more. A building of flats was still being held up in the distance, and a few two story buildings still stood.
There was a small shimmer in the distance, and as it grew, I realised it was an aftershock. As the wave of wind and dust and sand hit me like a tsunami, I was finally able to scream. Debris flew into my mouth and my torso, but there was no pain. My entire body was numb. Only a numbed, throbbing in my brain. As the mushroom cloud still grew, the flat building finally crumbled. Glass shattered, metal and concrete groaned and crushed, and one half disintergrated, falling. The other half laid to waste in under another second. The last vision that blew through my mind was that of peace, knowing I was going to be with my family now. White light filled my sight, and vision dissolved into nothingness.
I wrote this on the spot, C&C please. Last time I wrote something, I was critisized for "Raping their ears with adjectives". I'm hoping I've improved that.
I fluttered my eyes open, and immediately shut them. Sand was blowing, and it stung when it flew into my face. I crawled forward on my front, feeling the skin shedding on my already bloody chest, and I could no longer feel my legs. My arms were flaming with pain, and I moved at a slow and agonizing crawl. My face felt horrible, and blood had caked my forehead. The corpses of my comrades lay beside me, and as I reached the rear of the helicopter, a mortifying sight was spread out in front of me, like a scene from a sci-fi movie.
The world was gone. Obliterated, it seemed. I saw the world through what seemed like a screen of sepia and blood. Buildings had toppled, and a mushroom cloud rose in the distance. I fell out of the back of the heli, and a raw blinding flash of pain seared through my body. I grunted, my throat not able to produce the scream of horror I wanted to. It was a hoarse and horrible sound, and hearing it made me want to scream even more. A building of flats was still being held up in the distance, and a few two story buildings still stood.
There was a small shimmer in the distance, and as it grew, I realised it was an aftershock. As the wave of wind and dust and sand hit me like a tsunami, I was finally able to scream. Debris flew into my mouth and my torso, but there was no pain. My entire body was numb. Only a numbed, throbbing in my brain. As the mushroom cloud still grew, the flat building finally crumbled. Glass shattered, metal and concrete groaned and crushed, and one half disintergrated, falling. The other half laid to waste in under another second. The last vision that blew through my mind was that of peace, knowing I was going to be with my family now. White light filled my sight, and vision dissolved into nothingness.
I wrote this on the spot, C&C please. Last time I wrote something, I was critisized for "Raping their ears with adjectives". I'm hoping I've improved that.
