Good stuff, keep it coming. Just careful with the sound effects, the engine roar muffled the beginning of the conversation a bit. Either I'm sheltered or Star Wars space empire satire hasn't been done to death yet so I'm looking forward to the genre commentary. The bounty hunter bit is pretty good.
Is it supposed to be funny because they have normal lives but in space, because that's just lame. Literaly that would be the joke, that it's lame and by extension our lives are lame. That doesn't really tickle my funny bone.
Hmmm, back to characters we don't know anything about delivering forced, Seinfeld-esque dialogue and relying too heavily on old tropes. I liked how you played around with those tropes last time, it was clever. This was just lifeless. Sorry guys, series still has a lot of potential. Better luck next time.
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