So, like many others, I love to write stories. However, I also want to be original, so I am striving to make a story that is unique. To this end, I've come up with a story pitch that I'd like some feedback on.
What do you guys think of this premise? I know it could use some tweaking, but I'd like to hear your opinions on the concept.
Set in a fantasy world where technology is slowly beginning to overtake magic, the last great mage attempts to return things to the way they were, when magic was not limited by logic and science. However, upon tapping into the source of magic, the last great mage goes a bit too far.... accidentally becoming the world's first god. This act drives him insane, turning the mage into Mal, the Mad God.
Having the world be run by a Mad God isn't the most beneficial form of religion. Being mad, nothing Mal does makes sense, he is the very essence of madness and chaos made manifest. There is no rhyme or reason for his actions, he simply does things for his own amusement, be they evil or good.
However, Mal's insanity has a bad habit of causing major problems for the world. The Twelve Old Men are responsible for keeping the world afloat in space, the Dark Sea between the worlds. Above the world is the Great Mirror, which one day the world may look up to and see what has become of it. Mal's sudden godhood throws a wrench into this prophecy. He accidentally causes the Twelve Old Men to disappear, making the world "sink" into the Dark Sea, sending it hurtling into the unknown.
With their prophecy ruined, the world is getting fed up with Mal's sporadic nature. However, he is also the only one who can bring the world back to the way it was. The world's inhabitants have to grudgingly accept Mal as their god and hope that he some day return the world to its original spot.
What follows is a series of bizarre adventures as the world goes spinning through the void, passing by other worlds and strange creations. All the while, Mal has to come to grips with being God, and trying to deal with his raging insanity.
Having the world be run by a Mad God isn't the most beneficial form of religion. Being mad, nothing Mal does makes sense, he is the very essence of madness and chaos made manifest. There is no rhyme or reason for his actions, he simply does things for his own amusement, be they evil or good.
However, Mal's insanity has a bad habit of causing major problems for the world. The Twelve Old Men are responsible for keeping the world afloat in space, the Dark Sea between the worlds. Above the world is the Great Mirror, which one day the world may look up to and see what has become of it. Mal's sudden godhood throws a wrench into this prophecy. He accidentally causes the Twelve Old Men to disappear, making the world "sink" into the Dark Sea, sending it hurtling into the unknown.
With their prophecy ruined, the world is getting fed up with Mal's sporadic nature. However, he is also the only one who can bring the world back to the way it was. The world's inhabitants have to grudgingly accept Mal as their god and hope that he some day return the world to its original spot.
What follows is a series of bizarre adventures as the world goes spinning through the void, passing by other worlds and strange creations. All the while, Mal has to come to grips with being God, and trying to deal with his raging insanity.
What do you guys think of this premise? I know it could use some tweaking, but I'd like to hear your opinions on the concept.