Strider 2 (Playstation)

[Quickening666]

This will be my last review this year since I'm in the middle of moving house but as usual I've taken everything on board and get to the point pretty much straight away. Again this is a retro game so you may or may not care.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EXjeB1BWOX4

 

[end_boss]

Your reading and delivery is a bit flat, so your jokes lack punch. Try to relax a little. You seem to me as though you're trying to read very clearly so people can hear you through your thick accent, which is fine, but it is also depriving you of some character you could be inserting into your style. It's important for people to understand what you're saying, so you're definitely heading in a good direction, but try to loosen up a bit for the next one and see if that might help.

 

[scotth266]

Hey, it's you again! Thought you were in a coma or something

Good review as always. Hope the move goes well and that nothing breaks in the process.