This looked cute. I do however agree with the comments above, I've seen the same idea before and done better, but I'll give it a shot. It actually really reminds me of a youtube movie I watched years ago called The Gamers (Here's the link to episode 1 if any one is interested, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fiTEHqAeanw it's really good and funny). I'd like to see where this is going, although I didn't find the jokes to be that funny, I'm sure they will improve. I am excited for a new series on the escapist however!
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