Teaser help

[Alex-BetaDwarf]

Hi guys!

I'm currently working on a teaser for an upcomming game called Forced by BetaDwarf, a small indie company from Denmark!

Before we go to far into finalizing the teaser I want to test it out and see if the general idea of the teaser carries through in this rough version. Which is why I'm humbly asking all of you to kindly take a look at the teaser and give us your opinion.
The purpose of this teaser is to launch on Steam through their new greenlight initiativ next month. Thus, it is essential to us that the teaser is as good as it can get, so please put on your critical hats when you review this for us! Don't be afraid to be hard on us as long as you are also constructive about it.

Try to think about the following points when you critique this video.

What type of game is this?
does it present anything new or unique?
does the video spark your interest to learn more about the game?

Link to video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6t_gDRpnqCI

thank you in advance

Best regards,
Alex
On behalf of the BetaDwarf team

 

[ToastiestZombie]

Not sure if this counts as advertising... probably does. And also:

I'd rather have the youtube video embedded.

 

[Keoul]

You seem new and suspicious links are suspicious.
Is this it? I just kinda took the code from the end of your link and embedded the video.

 

[Alex-BetaDwarf]

Thanks for the advice guys!

I am indeed new on this forum and I do appologize if this is viewed as advertisment I can definetly see how this could be interpreted as such.. and If this breaks any rules I do understand if it is take down by an admin!

Also thanks Keoul for embedding the video, it is indeed the video I am trying to optain some feedback on and I will try to figure out how to embed it in the original post.. No need for suspicious links!