I guess in Heavy Rain.
I know the story had other plot holes in it but that REALLY stood out to me. I still really liked the game and respect what they were trying to do, and have high hopes for Beyond: Two Souls, but my word that stood out at me as being badly written.
When Madison finds out who the killer is and calls the FBI guy directly on his mobile phone. At no point have they ever talked or even acknowledged that they knew the other existed, yet she suddenly calls him and he's just like 'Oh hi Madison. Whats up?
I know the story had other plot holes in it but that REALLY stood out to me. I still really liked the game and respect what they were trying to do, and have high hopes for Beyond: Two Souls, but my word that stood out at me as being badly written.