It was a good montage. Just an idea or more really of a suggestion.
Why not speak your own experience? When I see a montage, I don't see an experience, I just see things that happened in the game. Don't you think it would be interesting to hear your first experience when you're crushing a grunt's face with only your fists? People tend to discuss more when you're sharing experiences. Add an audio part where you speak and where you tell us what you felt when you played the game. It's a suggestion. If you want to do your thing, that's fine.