Halley turns towards Nick. "You may call me Halley. Perhaps you may provide more information than freckles" she responded giving a quick menacing glance at Gregory. "I require the location and status of Dr. Gerick."
I think venom is right here. You should clear a character with Korten12 that possibley messes with the GM's lore. He has only said that Humans and the Ull'navai are the exisiting races. Anyways, I look forward to your participation.
He said something about other alien races and robots being a possibility, in which case I have a backup character. Untill he reviews my character and says if it is allowed or not I will just have to wait.
Also, not to be rude, you technically said I should make a character that messes with the lore, try to use a comma to seperate stuff like that. Why you may ask? Because not everyone is smart and can read a sentence properly and see an error (but I doubt or should I say, I hope that there is no one like that in these forums...).
True, but all it takes is a small spark to start a fire, I have seen it happen to, but like I said, I doubt there are people like that on this forum, that and I became a "grammar nazi" because that was the rule in an old forum I used to be in, basically they altered the way I RP and view sentences entirely.
Anyway, I think it would be better overall if we didn't discuss this and clutter up space on this roleplaying game topic, instead we should use the messaging feature.
You don't understand. Maybe you should read some other posts before joining an RP. Here at the escapist, we're all silly, wacky and friendly to eachover. The games and RP forum is one big comunity. I've spoken to pretty much every single person here.
I don't see a comma fixing what I said. "You should clear a character with Korten12 that possibley messes with the GM's lore." What would've made my statement more clear would be this, "You should clear your character with Korten12 if it messes with the GM's lore". But you're right, it's just some constructive critism. No need to take it personal. Just don't be a "nazi" about it. If everyone understands what the sentance was conveying then it doesn't need to be pointed out. End of discussion.
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BTW, friend away. LVC certainly wouldn't have wasted money putting her in a, although synthetic, body that would be considered unattractive. They have the technology. Besides, think of her stamina. lol
I wake early this morning bc of construction and I check this post for any updates and what do I see just some nonsensical banter but by the looks of the convo, it seems that some interpretations got mixed. Anywho, it woul dbe kinda cool to have a relationship in the thread especially any girl on girl ;P
As soundly as he slept, CJ was having one of the most disturbing dreams of his life. He had dreamed of an unfamiliar world but by the look sit was the current planet. The building he was in seemed like a normal Earth house but more futuristic in design. He walked around the house looking for any signs of life. Then he heard a "Hi Daddy" behind him. When he turned around, he saw young, light brown Ull'navai girl with her arms outstretched towards him. Suddenly, CJ woke in a daze, fell out of his bed, and hit his head for the third time.
Sam hit the floor. her eyes opened and she coughed a very small amount of blood. She stood up and realised that she was outside. She wiped the blood away from her hand and gasped. She could see a fire a long way in the distance. She gasped again.
I must have been sleepwalking... You idiot
Sam started to run towards the fire. What will Rai think?
She got slightly closer to the fire and saw some people in the distance and ran towards them. When she was close, she tripped on a root and fell.
"Ow..."
She clamberd up and moved towards a girl who was close by.
Nick looked at Halley.
"Sorry I don't know where this doctor is, I could try to help you find him"
Just as he was about to look at the man he had saved he heard a scream in the distance.
He stood up and said loudly "What the hell is up with everyone screaming from a distance"
He looked at the man who still hadn't introduced himself.
"No offence man, just thinking that it would be easier if everyone would just walk over here themselves."
Nick looked at the girl crawling on the ground.
So basically I am going to England for 16 days this next Wednesday. I know I have access to Internet and stuff but I am not sure how much I will be using it. I will come up with something for Nick tomorrow or the day after that, I have some ideas already but I'll post it later and then when you all forgot about me I'll return ^^. depending on how much access I have to the net I could come by but I have no idea so far so something that can keep me away for a longer period of time is going to happen to me but it is also something that I can return from very soon.
Halley's expression was stoic. She turned and looked at the woman that had stumbled up to her.
"The last 147 people have ignored me. Perhaps, since you have willingly approached me in conversation, you be listen to me and be of at least minimal help. Where is Dr. Gerick? I shall just ascertain his status myself."
Sam looked at the woman, slightly confused,
"Dr. Gerick? I...don't know who or where he is. I'm terribly sorry."
She moved down beside her,
"Could you please tell me where I am? I was sleep walking and got lost..."
Tears began to roll down her face again.
"I am unable to determine our exact location, but we are about 1km from the half of the ship that crashed in the jungle. Do you experience sadness often when you are lost?"
Gregory hit his head and walked behind Halley "'Dat Gerrick fella' Probably dead if no one knows where 'e is." He said and then saw Sam. "'Ello girly what happens to be wrong"
"Uuuh..."
She hesitated,
"I just feel sadness a lot in general. Do you mind if I sit next to you?"
She sat down beside Halley,
"What's your name? I'm Samantha, but you can call me Sam."
She held out a hand for her to shake. This woman is pretty... Don't get any ideas!
She gasped slightly.
She looked over her shoulder to the man. She gave him a strange look. She was a bit scared by him.
"Ummm...nothing"
"You may call me Halley." she said as her cold hand clasped Sam's. "You are welcome to sit where you like, but I really must find Dr. Gerick before the fires finish spreading and burn down the jungle. On my way here I perceived severe overgrowth on the jungle floor, providing ample fuel sources for the fires to spread quickly. His life may be in danger."
I thought Sam was further into the woods so I changed my last post a little
Nick went next to Halley and looked at the girl who had sat down besides her.
"You're at a human survival camp to put it in short. Where did you come from?"
He looked at the three people who had gathered around the place he was at.
"So I just got Halley's name but you two others are still strangers to me, the name was Nick"
Sam looked up at Nick and ignored Gregory,
"My name is Sam. There are aliens here. Some good and some bad. I was with the good aliens and then I went to sleep and woke up here..."
She looked back at Halley, waiting for an answer.
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