For some reason when you said Luna murdered Red's grandmother I thought you meant cannibalize. Made for an interesting visual and me imagining Luna still eating when Red got to the house.Trivun said:
I imagined Gretel waiting for the witch to turn around and then jumping up behind her and breaking her neck. For some reason she had a solid snake bandanna.
OP: I had an idea for a story, but then I remembered I suck at writing. Here's the premise anyway. The typically isolationist nerd finds a portal to another world in his attic. Unfortunately, instead of being some big hero there he's still just a weak, scared nerd. No one knows who he is or is willing to help him. He's not there because of some prophecy. He just ended up there by accident. He walks through the strange world and experiences all kinds of strange and horrible creatures. As you would expect, he is killed in less than 2 hours. Instead of just dieing and that being the end, he wakes up in the same spot that he entered the world to try again. There would definitely have to be a scene where he finds his corpse(s). I've never quite flushed out how it would end in my head. I think the only conclusion I could come to is that he goes insane. Of course, if that would happen the last scene would have to be set in the real world with him stuck in a straitjacket in a white room. Slowly he would rock back and fourth talking to himself. I know that's cliche, but it's a requirement.
It was just kind of a passing joke at first, but I kept coming back to it and it turned into that. I'm sure someone else has already thought of it though.
