Dude, take another look at your hands. When you turn your palms upwards, which side are the thumbs on? (HINT: not the way you've drawn them in P2 and P3. P1 and P4 are good though)
These images are all computer generated, huh? There are places where the sharp angles really jump out at the reader. The buddy's hair, for instance.
Art, just like reading, sometimes needs the once over (a proof-looking, if you will). With a webcomic, you're not really beholden to any deadline besides that which you set for yourself, so make good use of it.
EDIT: And, good Lord, he holds a pencil like he's he's going to use it a la Jason Bourne. Your hand doesn't make a fist when you write. I know it's just a comic, but it these little things that make a reader go "that's bad artwork." Generally, it's tiny little mistakes adding up that cause a poor reading. The overall style is just fine.
These images are all computer generated, huh? There are places where the sharp angles really jump out at the reader. The buddy's hair, for instance.
Art, just like reading, sometimes needs the once over (a proof-looking, if you will). With a webcomic, you're not really beholden to any deadline besides that which you set for yourself, so make good use of it.
EDIT: And, good Lord, he holds a pencil like he's he's going to use it a la Jason Bourne. Your hand doesn't make a fist when you write. I know it's just a comic, but it these little things that make a reader go "that's bad artwork." Generally, it's tiny little mistakes adding up that cause a poor reading. The overall style is just fine.
