You know, I really think this feature has promise, not a bad idea at all. And since you already sort of departed from the whole "guy movie" thing (blade runner does have action and stuff, but everyone knows that's not what it's about), you can pick pretty much any movie you want. But there's definitely some improvement possible, some of which has been offered in the comments already.
My personal real "problem" is with the references you use. You refer to the replicants as cylons, but BSG (the reboot, which is what you will make people think of when referencing it) is a fairly new show compared to Blade runner. Then there's "Firefly meets Fifth Element", which is just weird...since when is it acceptable to describe an older work using two vaguely relevant new works? It could just be me, but it really gives a confused feeling to the whole piece. Work to be done here, but definitely worth doing it.
My personal real "problem" is with the references you use. You refer to the replicants as cylons, but BSG (the reboot, which is what you will make people think of when referencing it) is a fairly new show compared to Blade runner. Then there's "Firefly meets Fifth Element", which is just weird...since when is it acceptable to describe an older work using two vaguely relevant new works? It could just be me, but it really gives a confused feeling to the whole piece. Work to be done here, but definitely worth doing it.