Smolderin said:
Forgive me if I am taking this the wrong way, but it seems as if you don't necessarily put the Ciaphas Cain series in high regards. Considering I am a person possibly looking to get into this series, may I ask why?
IMHO, the author is very obviously trying to write the Flashman series and set in it 40k. If you haven't heard of it, teh Flashman series is a set of historical novels about a reprehensible British officer who keeps having adventures he can't worm out of, and getting all sorts of awards for things he doesn't deserve. They were very well researched, with lots of endnotes and a massive bibliography for each book.
Unfortunately, while trying to cling to the Flashman formula, the author has also avoided any of the stuff that made it work. The whole point of Cain is that he's supposed to be a fraud, and that his reputation is undeserved. However, it's mentioned many times that it's not true, and that he genuinely is a hero, which totally undermines the whole point of the character.
There's also lots of footnotes (a big improvement on endnotes), but they aren't of any susbtance, they are just extra waffle or bad jokes. Often of the "you've seen this movie right...so have I!" sort. Very, very rarely the author will recognise there's a difference between repeating something someone else has written for laughs, and actually doing anything funny like parodying or otherwise commenting on it.
Now, this might not have been a problem if after removing everything that made Flashman work, the author had replaced it with something else. But he didn't, beyond crap jokes. The first story had a vaguely passable story, the second wasn't bad, but the series doesn't really work. The characters are poor, the writing style forgettable, the humour dreadful.
It's a shame, because the author has written some good stuff for the WHFB range, but just doesn't seem to be trying, or thinks simply repeating lines from other authors is inherently funny. Mind you, even in that series, two characters repeat the Monty Python line about being turned into a newt for no reason at all.