You're recent experiences ------ in amateurish haiku

nbamaniac

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I watched badminton
Very good players
Got stiff neck


Say other things?
Not experience?
Also in haiku.

-mods please delete this crap. stupid net connection made me double post a topic >.<-
 

Noala

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Tried to reply to thread
Cannot write a haiku
I am not from Japan
 

Kriptonite

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Popped over quickly
To see how this would turn out.
Just as I figured.

I have to say though,
The third comment made me laugh.
Well, that's all I've got.
 

Kriptonite

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Alrighty, I'm back.
Figured one more shot can't hurt.
Hope I'm right this time.

There's only one way
To find out and be certain,
I'll just keep trying.

Shall I continue?
I think many will tire
Of my ramblings soon.

One last verse for fun.
I've got rhymes for everyone.
So that's it, I'm done.
 

notsosavagemessiah

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cold early morning
i fall to the ground in pain
My knee has gave out

OR

4 months to the day
I have not seen her since then
28 more days

Final Edit:

6 long years gone by
It seems to have moved so slow
But not slow enough