Critical Miss: #19
- Thread starter The Wooster
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Oh man, 'Crazy Sock' day is my favorite day at work! Next to 'Hats inside' day!
I'm living the Dream Baby!
I'm living the Dream Baby!
There's a real lack of color and interest in the first few frames. Slightly more vivid illustrations could compliment the building up of the story at that point.Grey Carter said:
Lastly, does the fellatio imitation frame need to be so wide? That idea could benefit from a tighter shot.
Great story and great job overall so far, I just had suggestions.
What's that supposed to mean? I do have Pacman socks, I got them from Sainsburies the other day. They do good socks.Straying Bullet said:
Awesome triforce tattoo!
Great, as I now expect from this comic. "The wristbands do nothing!" great stuff.
Great, as I now expect from this comic. "The wristbands do nothing!" great stuff.
i bet somebodies already mentioned this, but that main girl really needs to get a change of hairstyle... they look more and more like mutton chops each strip
Totally. Although it's really embarrassing to laugh out loud at a line like that and then to realise everyone else in the office is either a) looking at you like you're a crazy person, or b) looking at you because it's blatantly obvious that you're not doing any real work.Lvl 64 Klutz said:
I like how, rather than leading to a punch line, this joke had a series of mini punchlines. Also, like so many others, I loved "I will subpoena their tears."
