Critical Miss: #19

Susan Arendt

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instantbenz said:
First let me correct that.

Ghengis John said:
instantbenz said:
Lastly, does the fellatio imitation frame need to be so wide? That frame could benefit from a tighter shot.
Yeah... get some tongue in there, that gets me off. Maybe some errant strands of her loose curly brown hair, since it's purdy? Cuz it'd look bedder. Right?
Did I get that quote right?

Lastly, no, there needs to be excrement everywhere, I mean walls, clothes, hair, teeth, nails and cheeks. That's the best turn on I can muster for such intelligent folk as yourself since, as the internet has no sexually stimulating material on it, you need comics about video games to be laden with explicit material.

Drop it child. It was a critique of the comic's design for adult eyes sans the juvenile, sex-crazed ignorance.
Both of you knock it off. The mutual condescension and snark is not appreciated.
 

traineesword

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Grey Carter said:
riottrio said:
i bet somebodies already mentioned this, but that main girl really needs to get a change of hairstyle... they look more and more like mutton chops each strip
You are absolutely correct, somebody already mentioned that.

Several times in fact.
glad to hear that other people do have eyes and are using them to see. wait somebody already mentioned that several times? bit persistant of them, i'm sorry for bringing it up, i'll wait for he/she to do that for me
 

K4RN4GE911

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Who the hell is driving the car?!

O.T., I thought this was pretty funny. Not the best, but everything she says is true.
 

Prophetic Heresy

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Aphroditty said:
Grey Carter said:
Critical Miss #19

Game previews can be particularly problematic.

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The Aesop Rock lyrics were nice. My personal favorite lines from that song were "anyone object come stand in the way / you could be my little Snake River Canyon today".

Nice comic overall too, at initial glance I thought it was going to be too crowded but it was pulled off fairly well.
And here I was thinking I'm the only person on this site that listens to Aesop Rock. "Fine. Sign of the swine and the swarm when the king is a whore who complies and conforms."

The line about the development people "living the dream" saddens me, though. I'm supposed to be attending Digipen this fall... :\
 

Neferius

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"By 'maintaining industry relations.' You can probably guess what that entails."

O.O... I think I'll go look it up on rule34 just to bet a better 'image' of that concept :D