Critical Miss: #19

[sketchesofpayne]

I'm wearing pacman socks. Pretty crazy!

Fake and Gay.

What's that supposed to mean? I do have Pacman socks, I got them from Sainsburies the other day. They do good socks.

I am sorry, I was just trying to troll you in a friendly manner. I think they are awesome, every person knows about PACMAN.

Like trying to kick you in the nuts in a friendly manner? >.>

 

[ucciolord1]

Lulz.
Lulz I say, Lulz!

 

[Sennz0r]

I'm wearing pacman socks. Pretty crazy!

Fake and Gay.

What's that supposed to mean? I do have Pacman socks, I got them from Sainsburies the other day. They do good socks.

I am sorry, I was just trying to troll you in a friendly manner. I think they are awesome, every person knows about PACMAN.

If you wanna '=3' the man it would've been more useful if he knew what you were going on about

 

[Cory Rydell]

She's wearing socks over hose... 0.o

She actually showed up without socks. But its like one of those fancy restaurants where you need a fancy shirt and tie to get in, but if you forget they have a spare somewhere in the back that looks really tacky. So they just gave her some normal athletic socks so she could get in and do a preview but it just drew more attention to her lack of crazy socks and made everything just a little more awkward for her.

 

[The Wooster]

i bet somebodies already mentioned this, but that main girl really needs to get a change of hairstyle... they look more and more like mutton chops each strip

You are absolutely correct, somebody already mentioned that.

Several times in fact.

 

[Varun Garuda Maharaj]

Anyone else notices the all seeing eye on erin's forearm?

 

[Vladamir69]

Anyone else notices the all seeing eye on erin's forearm?

Im fairly certain its the Tri-force symbol.

 

[Kavonde]

"I will subpoena their tears" is pretty much the greatest line ever.

Quoted for truth.

 

[instantbenz]

There's a real lack of color and interest in the first few frames. Slightly more vivid illustrations could compliment the building up of the story at that point.

Lastly, does the fellatio imitation frame need to be so wide? That idea could benefit from a tighter shot.

Great story and great job overall so far, I just had suggestions.

Who are you???!

An illustrator/graphic designer/photographer but mostly a gamer. That's who ^.-

 

[Sonofadiddly]

I'm just happy I got the Simpsons reference.

"My eyes! The goggles do nothing!"

 

[Netrosis]

This comic is improving! \o/

It's surprising to see so much content in a single page too. Keep up the good work!

 

[Ipsen]

Cory Rydell and Grey Carter have good taste in music.

 

[Boba Frag]

pretty good, actually.

I think that you're crowding your frame, though.

Granted, that's an awful lot to squeeze into one page, and you do a pretty job in fairness, but at the same time I couldn't shake the feeling that it was a little cramped and uneven... particularly the opening frames.

Feel free to ignore that, though- I think so far you've got a really good strip going and it has lots of potential.

 

[Aphroditty]

Critical Miss #19

Game previews can be particularly problematic.

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The Aesop Rock lyrics were nice. My personal favorite lines from that song were "anyone object come stand in the way / you could be my little Snake River Canyon today".

Nice comic overall too, at initial glance I thought it was going to be too crowded but it was pulled off fairly well.

 

[The Random One]

This appears to be finally growing a beard, I was starting to fear it would be a bust but this installment is beginning to shape up. LIKE A TURD nah, I'm joking, it's all good.

And his socks aren't very crazy either, you know. I can outcrazy those any day of the week.

 

[Souljourn]

This comic is veering off in a weird direction. Not bad, but weird.

Also, like others before me, I really think she could use a shave.

 

[Kollega]

Again, what are we supposed to laugh at? Total hopelessness and oral sex jokes? I might be missing something, but i didn't even snicker at this one.

 

[felixader]

I'm wearing pacman socks. Pretty crazy!

Fake and Gay.

What's that supposed to mean? I do have Pacman socks, I got them from Sainsburies the other day. They do good socks.

I am sorry, I was just trying to troll you in a friendly manner. I think they are awesome, every person knows about PACMAN.

Dadadadadadadada PACMAN!