I don't mind if you shorten or snippet. I tend to break it up into concise paragraphs, and if you think I missed something let me know.
Finn uses a lightsaber, and Rey for that matter, like it's actually a weapon. None of this airy fairy dancing bullshit of the prequel trilogy, but rather I feel like Abrams is channeling the original trilogy.
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I'm still waiting for people to point out what they think is structurally unsound with this shot. The lightsabers actually feel like weapons with a bit of weight. You could see someone swinging an arming sword in the trade of blows. It looks authentic.
What are you actually looking for in a Star Wars film?
As I'm saying, I think you missed some critical details in the duel. Because I came away with it that Rey was losing until Kylo tried using restraint and Rey had tapped into her malice and sense of hatred.
Moreover, for people that actually study combat the basics are no different. You don't just study the weapon, you study movement. Yours and your opponent. Archaic fighting schools in Europe like LVD are applicable with a range of weaponry and accoutrement, including traditionally how to use a cloak in combat. LVD is not about mastering a specific weapon, but understanding human anatomy, range of movement, and understanding physiological capability, force pressures and a constant mind as to personal geometry of yourself and your weapons in correlation to your opponent.
You'll find this is the solid core of any trained combatant in martial disciplines.
You can apply the same basics regardless of the weapon.
In fact I was more disappointed Finn as a trained soldier didn't stand up to Kylo longer. I suppose you can argue that he isn't a soldier at heart so maybe was inattentive. But Rey grew up on a savageworld, shown to have needed a knowledge of self-defence and faced realistic chances of being harmed by enemies of Plutt or the like.
As for the Force powers? Well, frankly I think the Star Wars universe has been far too 'magical bullshit' territory for years now. The Emperor works as the dark wizard of the tower with their lightning. But things like surviving 4-5 storey drops in TPM? The sad thing is there is zero consistency of what the Force does. I wouldn't mind just seeing less of it in general. So I agree there. So I don't really care ... andfrankly I would have preferred these scenes alltogether to be replaced with more conventional ideas of narrative discovery.
I would have preferred to see Rey act more roguish ... basically as she was when channeling her loathing into her fight to torment and toy with Kylo towards the end. If that was her baseline, but more manipulative, cunning, and cruel ... perfect. Hell, I would have been fine if she didn't bond with anybody but Finn ... because Finn and Rey actually have reasons to care about one another at least by that point.
That would have been fine with me ... if she simply said; "Let's put the Falcon to some good use, with me or not?"
As for the lightsaber duels? Frankly stuff like that is precisely why I want to watch the latest installment. Because lightsabers are actually weapons again. Not cheerleader batons. Where the blade actually looks like it has weight. Like it's swung as if it were a real weapon.
But I don't buy the idea of needing to use the force to actually treat a lightsaber as a weapon. And frankly if the whole lightsaber as Force capacity is a real thing, I'd use creative licence to drop that nonsense as well.... The duel in TFA is pretty indicative Rey uses her anger and malice to score a surprised hit on a Kylo that is actually showing restraint and tries to use the collapsing geostructure beneath as his chance to actually score a convert. Kylo could have killed her with his feint and then off-balancing her at the cliffside, but he showed restraint. It's Kylo's restraint and Rey's anger and malice that she uses to overpower him. Which is a pretty good twist to me, and it does sort of highlight why the Force is dangerous.Asita said:Apologies that I'm addressing so little, but experience tells me that exploding post length is one of the 'best' ways to kill a discussion (both in terms of amicability and interest). Regarding the "dirty fighting Force user" angle: That would certainly be an interesting future direction, but if it had shown up in TFA it would have made a bad situation worse due both to it implying greater proficiency with the Force than anyone that new to the power had any right to be and necessarily bringing up questions on whether or not that should be pushing her to the Dark Side. That can certainly work for someone who had training to keep from getting caught up in the heat of the moment, but for a newbie without training it toes uncomfortably close to "my character's a grey Jedi who can use darker powers and aggression without falling to the Dark Side" territory.
Finn uses a lightsaber, and Rey for that matter, like it's actually a weapon. None of this airy fairy dancing bullshit of the prequel trilogy, but rather I feel like Abrams is channeling the original trilogy.
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I'm still waiting for people to point out what they think is structurally unsound with this shot. The lightsabers actually feel like weapons with a bit of weight. You could see someone swinging an arming sword in the trade of blows. It looks authentic.
As opposed to Luke, no military training, no formal flight training, taking down the Death Star?In retrospect, I think this is a major point of disconnect between the two sides. It's not necessarily that Rey shouldn't have reached this point, it was that it happened too quickly without adequate reasoning. Rey reaching that point and surpassing it was to be expected. The problem is in large part that she grew to that point in a span of minutes. The first flight in the Falcon, for instance, had her start off rocky to emphasize her inexperience, but by the end of that same flight she was expertly ducking and weaving in an "aerial canyon chase", which is generally the kind of thing you reserve for when you really want to convey that a pilot is skilled and can beat enemies purely through superior piloting ability (think the canyon chase in Independence Day, the asteroid chase in Empire Strikes Back, and the trench run in Hunt for Red October). Similarly, in the span of a few minutes during a lightsaber duel she went from a hit and run approach which compensated for her lack of experience with that weapon type (this being the first time she'd ever wielded a lightsaber, as opposed to a metal staff which had a much different balance and way of handling) to simply outclassing and overpowering her opponent in a more standard duel.
What are you actually looking for in a Star Wars film?
As I'm saying, I think you missed some critical details in the duel. Because I came away with it that Rey was losing until Kylo tried using restraint and Rey had tapped into her malice and sense of hatred.
Moreover, for people that actually study combat the basics are no different. You don't just study the weapon, you study movement. Yours and your opponent. Archaic fighting schools in Europe like LVD are applicable with a range of weaponry and accoutrement, including traditionally how to use a cloak in combat. LVD is not about mastering a specific weapon, but understanding human anatomy, range of movement, and understanding physiological capability, force pressures and a constant mind as to personal geometry of yourself and your weapons in correlation to your opponent.
You'll find this is the solid core of any trained combatant in martial disciplines.
You can apply the same basics regardless of the weapon.
In fact I was more disappointed Finn as a trained soldier didn't stand up to Kylo longer. I suppose you can argue that he isn't a soldier at heart so maybe was inattentive. But Rey grew up on a savageworld, shown to have needed a knowledge of self-defence and faced realistic chances of being harmed by enemies of Plutt or the like.
I agree, and frankly I'd rather be ententained... 'cool' is preferable to 'lightsaber disco', surely?Much of this I actually attribute to Abrams being terrible at pacing and far too in love with spectacle (see the supernova in Star Trek 2009's backstory, Starkiller Base, Kylo Ren seemingly freezing a plasma bolt in spacetime...). Which is to say that I feel that he didn't consider what the scenes implied, he just wanted to make them "cool".
Honestly I already offered suggestions how I would of fixed any of this. But bad writing isn't a trait of the Mary Sue. And frankly I would have shot the lightsaber fighting specifically as we saw it in TFA.That said, in TFA's case it didn't help that Rey was accompanied by upwards of a few "paint by numbers bad OC" practices. These included the original cast immediately bonding with her (made worse by the writing flub of Leia apparently deciding that Rey rather than Chewie needed comforting over Han's death), inheriting the Falcon, "inheriting" Chewie, inheriting a protagonist's lightsaber (made worse by being "chosen" by it, a first for Star Wars), and near effortless discovery and use of active Force powers even before she knew she could use the Force (made worse by the fact that the first power she used (psychometry) was a rare Force ability most associated with Quinlan Vos). These are the kinds of things in particular that raise red flags and make the audience less accepting of other points that they might otherwise have excused. After a certain point it feels less like a developed character and more like the writers were simply asking "how can we make the character cooler", which is part and parcel of how bad Original Characters are made.
As for the Force powers? Well, frankly I think the Star Wars universe has been far too 'magical bullshit' territory for years now. The Emperor works as the dark wizard of the tower with their lightning. But things like surviving 4-5 storey drops in TPM? The sad thing is there is zero consistency of what the Force does. I wouldn't mind just seeing less of it in general. So I agree there. So I don't really care ... andfrankly I would have preferred these scenes alltogether to be replaced with more conventional ideas of narrative discovery.
I would have preferred to see Rey act more roguish ... basically as she was when channeling her loathing into her fight to torment and toy with Kylo towards the end. If that was her baseline, but more manipulative, cunning, and cruel ... perfect. Hell, I would have been fine if she didn't bond with anybody but Finn ... because Finn and Rey actually have reasons to care about one another at least by that point.
That would have been fine with me ... if she simply said; "Let's put the Falcon to some good use, with me or not?"
As for the lightsaber duels? Frankly stuff like that is precisely why I want to watch the latest installment. Because lightsabers are actually weapons again. Not cheerleader batons. Where the blade actually looks like it has weight. Like it's swung as if it were a real weapon.