4Aces said:
The two Wesleys (biochem and engineering) are seriously annoying. Half their techno-babble is just that in this episode. At least for the pilot the science was well written, but in this episode - not so much.
This. I can't help but think of ST:TNG whenever the technobabble is spoken, additionally it always felt that the entire crew (even Wesley!)
knew what they were talking about and could translate it into an understandable form.
Without having to be asked! Except perhaps for Data during the earlier seasons anyway, but even he learned.
Moving on slightly, I do feel the writing is poor over these two episodes. It feels more as if it's a live-action rendition of Ultimate Spider-Man...so we are probably due for one or two reasonably good episodes and absolute Helicarrier-sized loads of filler. Why should we care about the characters? Right now, they're empty vessels without a reason to care for them. What's with the fight scenes? They never seem quite right to me, as if the editing was slightly off or the fist punching sounds a bit too generic. Or it could just be that the actors involved are lifeless MDF...with the exception of Clark Gregg, who I feel isn't given enough to really do and that - ironically - he is put to better use in Ultimate Spider-Man.
As for the visuals, the scene where Skye boards the Helicarrier? It screamed "we're on a soundstage!", it was as if I was watching a 60s series doing an "outdoor" indoor scene. As for those drones? They're still chintzy, poorly composited (anyone ever see shadows being cast by them?) and having a cameraman do a "wobbly path" to something and an overlay added in post-production? Just build a damn tricorder already! And naming them will probably find the absolute core fanbase recording such details, given that the rest of us more than likely won't as they aren't characters to the audience-at-large (just pieces of equipment) and as for Ward's silver stick and it's CGI effects...argh!
Now if the writing and all the acting performances were on a par with even the original X-Men 90s cartoon - despite that being overly theatrical at times - it would be nothing short of fantastic, regardless of the effects. Maybe if Deadpool was to come along and kill off some of the characters at the end of the season? And perhaps even be shouting things like "your contract has been renegotiated! To the auditions with you!" and if those drones are used? "Oooh! Shiny!" and then swat them between his hands as if they were flies...preferably one-by-one in front of those techies! Maybe even doing a "now this little drone went...BANG! And this little drone..." and so on. Now
that would be nothing short of hilarious and I would definitely watch that!
Unfortunately, I can also see Agents of SHIELD's writers buggering up that too... :\
EDIT: For the sake of clarity, I have (of course) watched many a TV series where it was clear the actors were on a set. The differences though, are too numerous to mention but here are a few: that typically they were either decades old already by the time I got to see them, that a new episode was being completed every 7-10 days, the money just wasn't there and so on. Reasons can be given (as opposed to excuses being made).
For a 2013 big-budget and branded series that has to have state-of-the-art everything and has access to technologies and money that TV series back in the 90s (and obviously prior) could only dream of and still fall short? Worse that the acting and writing makes me notice these things? Then the cast and crew really need to up their game because, even based on just this thread alone, it's not just me who isn't exactly impressed with the series right now. Maybe in a few episodes. Maybe.