Blood Stained Knight

[Korten12]

[HEADING=1]Story[/HEADING]
The world has been split into two, one side of purity and the other side of infection... Once they were together but suddenly when a infection started to spread turning people into monsters it made non-infected people scared who, started to run. To contain the disease, they built a large wall across the world. No one is allowed onto the other side. Every mage and priest have tried to heal the infection but nothing has worked. People believe that they will never be able to return to their homes...

Krin, a boy who's whole entire family, cousins, aunts, uncles were turned into the monsters, know wears a suit of blood stained armor. His reasons, to find the cause of the disease because he is the only one on the purity side that is immune, a reason he only knows.

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Now before anyone says that it all seems very cliche and needs more details on the world, lots of stuff is being hidden becuase I don't want to spoil anything.

Edit: Link Removed (Please do not advertise; feel free to post the chapters here) ~Moderator - [HEADING=2]Prologue and Chapter 1 OUT!

Also people need to know that don't go in expected a triple A novel level writing.[/HEADING]


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[Dango]

Looks like it could go somewhere good. Also, I want it to have time travel, because that would cool.

 

[Applejack]

Sounds slightly similar to Disgaea 2, fortunately no what you do your story will be better than it was

 

[S.R.S.]

Well you've got me hooked. Bookmarked! I'm calling it now; He sacrifices himself so the world can be whole again... just sayin'.

 

[Mr. Grey]

Huh... lots of stories popping up. We should get the staff to make a separate forum for this kind of a thing.

OT: I want to know the landmass of this earth before I question the ability for a wall to be built to stop the infected from crossing -- let alone in time.

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Actually, I'll blame the wizards. I shall bookmark, but be wary... for I am picky when it comes to such things.

 

[Korten12]

Huh... lots of stories popping up. We should get the staff to make a separate forum for this kind of a thing.

OT: I want to know the landmass of this earth before I question the ability for a wall to be built to stop the infected from crossing -- let alone in time.

...

Actually, I'll blame the wizards. I shall bookmark, but be wary... for I am picky when it comes to such things.

the world is one large continent with many islands. With Mages help, walls have been built on water.

 

[Korten12]

Purity and Infection aren't opposites, so I don't see why you pit them against themselves.

um... yes they are... 0.0

 

[LongAndShort]

I'll admit you've caught my interest. If you promise to improve your spelling and grammar, I'll read it.

 

[Korten12]

Purity and Infection aren't opposites, so I don't see why you pit them against themselves.

um... yes they are... 0.0

"Once they were together but suddenly when a infection started to spread turning people into monsters it made people scared and started to run."

They were together, then one started to 'infect'.

They are the same, and opposites, and cause the meaningful rift in this world then, eh?

oh... okay, I see now, thanks.

 

[Beartrucci]

Sounds interesting, I've bookmarked this thread so I can come back and read it later when you've hopefully posted up the prologue and first chapter.

 

[Korten12]

Sounds interesting, I've bookmarked this thread so I can come back and read it later when you've hopefully posted up the prologue and first chapter.

they should be out, I hope.

 

[Mr. Grey]

Huh... lots of stories popping up. We should get the staff to make a separate forum for this kind of a thing.

OT: I want to know the landmass of this earth before I question the ability for a wall to be built to stop the infected from crossing -- let alone in time.

...

Actually, I'll blame the wizards. I shall bookmark, but be wary... for I am picky when it comes to such things.

the world is one large continent with many islands. With Mages help, walls have been built on water.

I knew it was the fault of wizards!

Damn them and their unicorns of doom!

 

[Korten12]

Huh... lots of stories popping up. We should get the staff to make a separate forum for this kind of a thing.

OT: I want to know the landmass of this earth before I question the ability for a wall to be built to stop the infected from crossing -- let alone in time.

...

Actually, I'll blame the wizards. I shall bookmark, but be wary... for I am picky when it comes to such things.

the world is one large continent with many islands. With Mages help, walls have been built on water.

I knew it was the fault of wizards!

Damn them and their unicorns of doom!

Well prologue is out now. edited the prologue.

 

[Korten12]

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prologue and Chapter one have been released.

 

[Applejack]

I like parts of it. After reading the prologue are you sure that's fiction?

 

[Korten12]

I like parts of it. After reading the prologue are you sure that's fiction?

um... yes, how can it not be? 0.0

 

[Applejack]

I like parts of it. After reading the prologue are you sure that's fiction?

um... yes, how can it not be? 0.0

I was joking, you know so many diseases and cruelty in the real world. Anyways if want to give real feedback should I post here under a spoiler tab, PM you, or post on wordpress?

 

[Korten12]

I like parts of it. After reading the prologue are you sure that's fiction?

um... yes, how can it not be? 0.0

I was joking, you know so many diseases and cruelty in the real world. Anyways if want to give real feedback should I post here under a spoiler tab, PM you, or post on wordpress?

any of them.

 

[Korten12]

sorry for double post but does anyone else have anything to say?

 

[Catalyst6]

Hm. Blatant self-promotion. Drop thine BanHammer, mods!

As for the story, it's one thing to hide details to avoid spoilers, it's another thing entirely to use the "it gets better later" excuse with such abandon.