I hate being this guy... Na, who am I kidding I love being this guy, but: Mass Effect 3 was not "good" until the ending.
Only regarding the events related to the comic, That sub mission played out and ended the same regardless of how you handled their relationship in the second game.
Shepard has no influence on anything that happened in ME 3 (except Saving/destroying the Genophage data, and certain character's deaths) That whole mission played out exactly the same whether the Rachnai were saved or killed in the first game.
Mass Effect 3 was good writing stuck together with offensive Ret-cons and gaping plot holes.
Don't get me wrong behind my rage I liked your comic.
Could you go back and do one for if you told Ereba to break up with Char in the second game?
Because Bioware apparently doesn't think anyone did that.