Critical Miss: Children of Steam #6: Carrying the Light

Engarde

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The third panel from last looks hilarious, for some reason. Totally removed it from being touching, in a good way.
 

JohnTomorrow

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Very nice. Very deep. Although it might take him a while to pull the trigger...

...and speaking of which, you dont really know how to draw a gun, do you? You've draw the top of the handgun backwards, so the shell ejection port is at the front of the barrel...so when he fires his gun, it blows up in his hand, because the blowback doesnt send the brass flying, thus containing the explosive force of the gunpowder, thus making it blow up in his hand...

...so yeah. nit picker 101.
 

Divinegon

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Was I the only one expecting him being too slow and doing it and getting bitten as well?

Ah hah, get it? Because you know...Slow? Bro? Slowbro?

Is this post on?
 

Danny Ocean

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DTWolfwood said:
Arkhangelsk said:
DTWolfwood said:
wait i thought the survivors were immune to them...wait a minute i spot a plot hole! D:
Yeah, but you can still be bitten so hard that you hemorrhage lots of blood.
so i guess bandaging him was too much as compared to a bullet XD
He was missing an arm, bro.

Aint no bandage gonna fix that.

Classic comedy, though. Truly classic.
 

Cory Rydell

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JohnTomorrow said:
Very nice. Very deep. Although it might take him a while to pull the trigger...

...and speaking of which, you dont really know how to draw a gun, do you? You've draw the top of the handgun backwards, so the shell ejection port is at the front of the barrel...so when he fires his gun, it blows up in his hand, because the blowback doesnt send the brass flying, thus containing the explosive force of the gunpowder, thus making it blow up in his hand...

...so yeah. nit picker 101.
well I dont really know how to draw guns, but its not the ejection port in the front, just the barrel. I figured the port would be on the right side of the gun that cant be seen.

So I had this covered, Im just not good enough to put it into lines and color then call it art.
 

DTWolfwood

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Arkhangelsk said:
DTWolfwood said:
Arkhangelsk said:
DTWolfwood said:
wait i thought the survivors were immune to them...wait a minute i spot a plot hole! D:
Yeah, but you can still be bitten so hard that you hemorrhage lots of blood.
so i guess bandaging him was too much as compared to a bullet XD
Do you really except a Pokémon to be taught in first aid?
no but to be fair the others also said to leave him :p