My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: The Journal of the Two Sisters (3/5)
So like the MLP comcis I read, this was obtained to help me with writing a MLP multi-chapter. However, that didn't turn out the way I expected. Ergo, I'm actually going to give this two sets of reviews in a sense - one judging the book entirely by its own merits, the other as to how things turned out.
So, let's start with something. This is half sourcebook, half stuff. So the first half of this review is going to have to be further divided to accomodate that this is actually two books in one. The first is a literal journal of Celestia and Luna from their crowning as rulers of Equestria to...well, the end of the journal. Okay, seriously, you could have at least gone as far as Luna becoming Nightmare Moon, but nup, it takes an arbitrary point and ends. Still, everything up to that point is decent, or at least as decent as a book in this format for a primarily chidlren audience can be. Yes, I've read sourcebooks for various franchises before, but while this does fit the paradigm, in that it's in-universe character writing providing worldbuilding, there's only so much depth it can go into. Now, that's not to say this is bad - it does provide some decent worldbuilding for the early days of Equestria, and the politics (such as they are) that developed at the time - but it can only go into so much depth. Also, this isn't really the fault of the book per se, but in its context, Celestia is portrayed as the down to earth one, while Luna is the adventurous one. Yet in season 9, it's the other way round.
So, what's the other half of this book? Diary entries from the Mane 6 and supporting characters tying into events during season 4. Now, in fairness, this arguably ties in with the first half of the book in that it details the sisters finding the Tree of Harmony, seeing the three marks (sun, moon, star), and Star Swirl telling them that the one whom the star corresponds to is an individual that the sisters will meet later. If you coulnd't put together upon reading this that this is foreshadowing of Twilight Sparkle, then congratulations, I've got property on the moon that I can sell to you. But before you go, let me tell you that the second half makes no connection between this. I'm not complaining that the book doesn't spell out that Twilight's very existence is practically pre-ordained, I'm complaining that in the context of this volume, it's never really acknowledged by the characters themselves. Like, I dunno, imagine Return of the Jedi where Leia being Luke's sister is only established by Obi-Wan and Yoda talking together. The viewer becomes aware of this fact, but the fact never becomes relevant to the narrative itself. This is kind of a simialr situation. And look, maybe the show did bring it up (I can't remember), but if you're going to foreshadow stuff, at least follow through. Or better yet, commit your book to more worldbuilding not diary entries that serve no real purpose aside from "hey, this is what character X was thinking after episode Y." None of it is relevatory, it's just, at best, extra character development, and even then, building off pre-existing development.
So, that's how this book functions on its own. Decent, but it tries to do two things, and both are left wanting at the end of the day. But before the day ends, I'm going to move into some self-indulgence. I got this book because of the MLP story I was writing, and I needed clarification on certain elements of canon. Suffice to say, the canon's been clarified. In fact, it's been clarified so well that I can no longer post the story, or at least, I can't post it without breaking canon entirely. I'm not talking about tweeks made to the story, I'm saying that the story literally cannot occur in any sense in its present form. And not only that, but another story I wrote ages ago in the setting can no longer be included in personal canon because the worldbuilding in the book invalidates the story completely. I mean, this isn't unheard of - I've written plenty of stuff thati's been invalidated over time - but this is the only time I can think of where two works of fine have been invalidated simultaniously. And you may be saying "come on, it's fanfic, it was never canon to begin with," and that's absolutely true, but since fanfic is all I can hope to ever achieve at this point, then, yes, it does hit. Hits hard. Hardly a real problem in a world with so many, but, well, whatever. None of this is the book's fault of course, but ultimately I'm going to have to scrap the story and decide what to do with its corpse.
In the meantime, the sourcebook is okay, but only if you're a die-hard fan.