I'd argue that's more a poem than a story. It's imagery that evokes an emotional response, but there's no narrative.Realitycrash said:Take the classic Hemingway story, for instance. "Baby shoes for sale, never worn". That's the entire story (and Hemingway famously went on to claim it was his best).
Also, the only reason he claimed it was his best story was that he was trying to make a point about how clever he was. He might also have been drunk and depressed at the time.
--Morology!