It's hard to appreciate the work in that video if the narrator is going to be flat. I wouldn't be so critical of it, but when comparing this video to this one [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_opf7-bWIR8], the difference is painfully obvious.
And honestly, there are some parts in that video that are unnecessary. In particular: 1:29-1:46. You went from "They were unable to do [X]" to "They were able to do [X]", and makes that near 20 seconds of video completely pointless, save for setting up the recruitment of your team members.
I fail to see why Mahalo is here on The Escapist. Better them than Media Cows, but still: are they really in such a bind that they need The Escapist to get them more attention?
And honestly, there are some parts in that video that are unnecessary. In particular: 1:29-1:46. You went from "They were unable to do [X]" to "They were able to do [X]", and makes that near 20 seconds of video completely pointless, save for setting up the recruitment of your team members.
I fail to see why Mahalo is here on The Escapist. Better them than Media Cows, but still: are they really in such a bind that they need The Escapist to get them more attention?