this is a poem i wrote in my spare time thinking of the girl who i don't have the balls to talk to.
I can tear you in two,
I can cause you to cry,
I set delusions upon you,
I can cause you to lie,
I can make you blind,
I can cause you to sigh,
I can mess with your mind,
I can cause you to die,
And yet you can?t fully understand
Why i constantly demand,
To be put above,
All i am,
is Love.
Pliz tell me what ya think, any advice or ideas for other poems, (if you think i'm good enough).
I can tear you in two,
I can cause you to cry,
I set delusions upon you,
I can cause you to lie,
I can make you blind,
I can cause you to sigh,
I can mess with your mind,
I can cause you to die,
And yet you can?t fully understand
Why i constantly demand,
To be put above,
All i am,
is Love.
Pliz tell me what ya think, any advice or ideas for other poems, (if you think i'm good enough).