Poll: A sonnet about Bioshock

[messy]

This is pretty good! How long did you spend writing it?

I'd say it took me about 20 minutes, for some reason sonnets just come fairly easy to me. I think it's something to do with the way you're constricted to the 10 syllables and the fourteen lines so my mind can't wonder as much

 

[AkJay]

I remember in 9th grade english we had to write a sonnet, i wish i had written this.

 

[Vrex360]

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

 

[Simalacrum]

lol, heck, why the hell not? could try reveiwing some games in sonnets, that would be interesting too

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

will you allow me to live too if I give you a hug and juggle for you?

 

[Vrex360]

lol, heck, why the hell not? could try reveiwing some games in sonnets, that would be interesting too

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

will you allow me to live too if I give you a hug and juggle for you?

*snorts*

Dance for me mortal.

 

[Simalacrum]

lol, heck, why the hell not? could try reveiwing some games in sonnets, that would be interesting too

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

will you allow me to live too if I give you a hug and juggle for you?

*snorts*

Dance for me mortal.

whoever said I was mortal?

Bring it on demon, I shall not dance for you! I'll have you know that I juggle with knives! RAWR D:<

 

[Vrex360]

lol, heck, why the hell not? could try reveiwing some games in sonnets, that would be interesting too

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

will you allow me to live too if I give you a hug and juggle for you?

*snorts*

Dance for me mortal.

whoever said I was mortal?

Bring it on demon, I shall not dance for you! I'll have you know that I juggle with knives! RAWR D:<

You, challenge me... so be it.
Let this be our final battle.

RAWR VREX POWERS VITALISE... SUMMON THE POWER OF HYPNOTOAD!!!

Spoiler

Now bow before your master and obey

 

[HentMas]

being a poetry writter i have to say it kind of sounds forced in some sentencess, perhaps adjusting the tune of what you are saying to give it more rytm?? i dont know, something seemed odd while reading it.

but great work none the less, i loved the references you made and the opening line is powerfull and impressive, perhaps thats why all the rest doesn´t seem in the same tune.

loved your poem, great work!!!

(oh, and in my humble opinion, all those rules about making poems and that are just stupid, too restrictive, why go with one rule when you can be extremely more creative when you dont?... being a poet doesn´t mean to follow said rules, is to be able to make things from the heart in my humble opinion)

 

[Cargando]

Imagine it's Morgan Freeman reading it out loud. =¬) I thought it was great!

 

[Simalacrum]

lol, heck, why the hell not? could try reveiwing some games in sonnets, that would be interesting too

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

will you allow me to live too if I give you a hug and juggle for you?

*snorts*

Dance for me mortal.

whoever said I was mortal?

Bring it on demon, I shall not dance for you! I'll have you know that I juggle with knives! RAWR D:<

You, challenge me... so be it.
Let this be our final battle.

RAWR VREX POWERS VITALISE... SUMMON THE POWER OF HYPNOTOAD!!!

Spoiler

Now bow before your master and obey

sorry, what?

I juggle with a blindfold on, sorry.

Hypnotode's attack wasn't very effective...

I also throw knives. See where this is going?

SIMALACRUM CASTS KNIFE THROW!

 

[Merteg]

Very good. I'd like to read more.

 

[messy]

being a poetry writter i have to say it kind of sounds forced in some sentencess, perhaps adjusting the tune of what you are saying to give it more rytm?? i dont know, something seemed odd while reading it.

but great work none the less, i loved the references you made and the opening line is powerfull and impressive, perhaps thats why all the rest doesn´t seem in the same tune.

loved your poem, great work!!!

(oh, and in my humble opinion, all those rules about making poems and that are just stupid, too restrictive, why go with one rule when you can be extremely more creative when you dont?... being a poet doesn´t mean to follow said rules, is to be able to make things from the heart in my humble opinion)

I know rules don't have to be followed but if anyone asks its to contrast the world of rapute which by design is free of rules. And in regards to rhythm I find it really hard to get a good grasp on that because in real life I don't really have much rhythm

 

[phi161]

Very nice indeed. Keep up the good work

 

[Vrex360]

lol, heck, why the hell not? could try reveiwing some games in sonnets, that would be interesting too

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

will you allow me to live too if I give you a hug and juggle for you?

*snorts*

Dance for me mortal.

whoever said I was mortal?

Bring it on demon, I shall not dance for you! I'll have you know that I juggle with knives! RAWR D:<

You, challenge me... so be it.
Let this be our final battle.

RAWR VREX POWERS VITALISE... SUMMON THE POWER OF HYPNOTOAD!!!

Spoiler

Now bow before your master and obey

sorry, what?

I juggle with a blindfold on, sorry.

Hypnotode's attack wasn't very effective...

I also throw knives. See where this is going?

SIMALACRUM CASTS KNIFE THROW!

VREX DEFLECTS

Hurm... needs stonger stuff. What can I use to kill this... but of course!!

"BUDDHA PALM!!!"

*Knocks Simalacrum out of the ring with gail force spiritual energy*

Victory to the Vrex!!

p.s please take not offense from refereance I was merely being satirical.

 

[HentMas]

being a poetry writter i have to say it kind of sounds forced in some sentencess, perhaps adjusting the tune of what you are saying to give it more rytm?? i dont know, something seemed odd while reading it.

but great work none the less, i loved the references you made and the opening line is powerfull and impressive, perhaps thats why all the rest doesn´t seem in the same tune.

loved your poem, great work!!!

(oh, and in my humble opinion, all those rules about making poems and that are just stupid, too restrictive, why go with one rule when you can be extremely more creative when you dont?... being a poet doesn´t mean to follow said rules, is to be able to make things from the heart in my humble opinion)

I know rules don't have to be followed but if anyone asks its to contrast the world of rapute which by design is free of rules. And in regards to rhythm I find it really hard to get a good grasp on that because in real life I don't really have much rhythm

humm... yeah, i see what you did there hehe, nice, well, anywhay i would recommend some writers to you but all the ones i know of are latin american so unless you are great in spanish, i would tell you wich ones

 

[messy]

SNIP

DOUBLE SNIP

humm... yeah, i see what you did there hehe, nice, well, anywhay i would recommend some writers to you but all the ones i know of are latin american so unless you are great in spanish, i would tell you wich ones

Unforturuantly I can only speak English and a little bit of French, thanks for the offer anyway

 

[Simalacrum]

lol, heck, why the hell not? could try reveiwing some games in sonnets, that would be interesting too

This has pleased the mighty Vrex, when I take over the world you shall be allowed to live.

will you allow me to live too if I give you a hug and juggle for you?

*snorts*

Dance for me mortal.

whoever said I was mortal?

Bring it on demon, I shall not dance for you! I'll have you know that I juggle with knives! RAWR D:<

You, challenge me... so be it.
Let this be our final battle.

RAWR VREX POWERS VITALISE... SUMMON THE POWER OF HYPNOTOAD!!!

Spoiler

Now bow before your master and obey

sorry, what?

I juggle with a blindfold on, sorry.

Hypnotode's attack wasn't very effective...

I also throw knives. See where this is going?

SIMALACRUM CASTS KNIFE THROW!

VREX DEFLECTS

Hurm... needs stonger stuff. What can I use to kill this... but of course!!

"BUDDHA PALM!!!"

*Knocks Simalacrum out of the ring with gail force spiritual energy*

Victory to the Vrex!!

p.s please take not offense from refereance I was merely being satirical.

SIMALACRUM USES KNOWLEDGE!

Buddha's are sacred figures who are meant to save people, not harm them in any way or any form. Infact, they're hands are infact webbed so that they may 'scoop' and save as many people as possible. Therefore, 'Buddha palm' would only give me a nice pat and some sacred holiness. Infact, since your a demon, it should hurt you worse...

REVERSE BUDDHA PALM!!