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Name: Ezekiel Fried, Operates under the name Red Chance

Description: Young at 18 and not very tall at 5"11' with a medium build and a thick uneven Mohawk with a slight red tinge. Constantly complains that he's freezing, wears leather fingerless gloves one black and one white, heavy black coat with a hood lined with fur and jeans. Two 9mm pistols on his waist and a 12 gauge shotgun strapped to his back. Carries two red dice at all times.

Bio: Born in the slums of Harbour city Red never cared much about life or anything really besides sleeping and games of chance. He slept through the majority of the week of Darkness, complaining that is was cold and didn't last long enough. After the darkness was lifted, Red felt no different if anything he felt worse, annoyed and bored he found an illegal dice game and quickly started winning big, too big as several of the player's felt he had been cheating and shot him in the head... twice. One year passed before Red woke up, the bullets had damaged his brain but had missed the most vital regions. The damage done to his brain unfortunately left him slightly crazy, prone to hallucination's, short-term memory, confusion and general oddness. The doctor's decided that while in his state of mind he was a danger to society and prepared to lock him in a mental facility, as luck would have it a nearby Shadow lost control of his powers and caused an explosion that allowed Red to escape. Never quite in control of himself Red occasionally found himself for hire by various criminal organization's and soon found himself enjoying the mayhem and destruction he created.

Personality: Crazy and unable to take anything seriously often getting distracted or forgetting what he was doing, carefree he often speaks his mind regardless of the situation or appropriateness. He enjoys the mayhem and confusion of Chaos and occasionally refers to himself as it's incarnation.

Power: Affect probability in his favor by making improbable (but not impossible) things to occur within his line of sight

Weakness: Highly Mentally Unstable, Probability is not always on his side, cannot affect the probability of something of he is unaware of it.

Armour: The odds are even more in Red's favor as his ability subconscious alerts him to nearby danger's.

limit break: Red can temporarily force himself to regain complete sanity and bend probability to his will forcing the most insanely of improbable of events to occur. Red clams "sanity hurts" and will go completely insane for at the minimum of 12 hours, though often longer, and become a danger to everyone.
 

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Name: Jason Cole (a.k.a Soul)

Description: Jason has dark black hair and bright red eyes. His teeth are sharpened, and his ears end in points. He normally wears a black leather jacket, and dark black pants. Jason wears dark black gloves, and a mask, shaped to look like a demons face.

Bio: Jason is 17, and was born in Harbor City. Jason used to be a normal kid, hanging out with friends in his spare time, and playing guitar in the City square. During the Great Darkness, Jason lost everyone... his friends, family, anyone he had been close to before the Darkness. They were lost to monsters, beings that were normally thought to be extinct. Jason looked for them after the week, but there was no trace of them, the only thing Jason could find was the blood of his family spread against his living room walls.

Jason went insane, having lost all of his friends and family, he went off on his own into the Deadlands, surviving for three weeks on his own before recently returning to Harbor City. Jason was changed in the weeks he spent in the Deadlands, his eyes taking on a blood-red hue, and his teeth growing sharper. During that time, Jason learned of his new power and managed to mast a few of its stages.

Recently, Jason has been laying in wait, waiting for something to occur. It was during this wait, that Jason heard of the Shadow Guardians, a group bent on overthrowing the government. Jason has decided to look into this new group.

Power: Jason has control over shadows and darkness, able to manipulate the shadows to his own will. Jason can morph the shadows into a solid object or any form that he wishes, and then change it back into shadows at will. Jason can also morph the shadows onto his body, creating a whip or any other number of weapons. Jason can also use shadows as a form of transportation, using a group of shadows much like a teleporter to another group of shadows.

Weakness: The process of changing shadows from a solid form to their original form is time consuming. It takes a few seconds for the change to take place, and during that change the shadows can easily be cut through.

Armour: Jason can wrap himself in shadows, creating a suit of near impenetrable shadow armor, but he can only maintain the suit for a limited amount of time.

Limit Break: When Jason uses his limit breaker, his shadows become stronger and more deadly, Jason also becomes faster. If someone is hit with one of Jason's shadows while he is using his limit break, they will be poisoned, polluting their body and soul with darkness which will slowly eat away at their soul until nothing is left but anger and darkness.
 

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avouleance2nd said:
Xero Scythe said:
Name: Damien Lier

Description: Standing tall at 6'3", Damien often looks down upon most people through his storm grey eyes. His raven black hair always contrives to keep itself short, while his face manages to show tiredness even when he is fully alert. He has managed to keep fat off his body, resulting in an athletically muscular body best described as streamlined. A strange cross-like scar mars the back of his right hand, while a massive scar runs down Damien's left shoulder to his left hip. Damien's usual attire includes snow-white sneakers, comfortable black sweatpants that are easy to move around in, a dark blue shirt, and finally a white hoodie with a tribal tattoo right over his heart.

Bio: At age 21, Damien isn't really surprised by much anymore. He was born in Los Angeles, and fell in with a gang, like so many teens there. A month before The Darkness, Damien was betrayed and left for dead by his best friend, Aron, in an attempt to save his own skin. Fortunately for Damien, a nearby apartment had been set on fire and a passing ambulance heard his screams of rage. Damien then spent the entire month and The Darkness within bed, trying to rehabilitate shredded muscles. After The Darkness rose, Damien felt a change within himself. This was confirmed when he managed to cut himself loose from the restraining bands with his shadow. He looked to seek revenge upon Aron, but found out later he was poisoned to death by a chimera. From that point on, Damien always had a liking of the fanciful beasts. He decided to cross the Deadlands, to train his power and to escape the memories. He eventually made it all the way across to Harbour City, on the other side of the country with nothing but his powers and his motorcycle.

Personality: Damien is usually quite cutting and to the point, often without regard for the feelings of others. He doesn't enjoy screwing around much and would rather just get to the matter at hand.

Power: Shadow Blades- Damien's power is the epitome of the 'Shadow'- that is, it uses his own shadow as material. Damien is able to form and control a blade within the radius of his shadow. He is able to stretch his shadow to make it thinner, but any thinner than a centimeter and the blade would shatter. Damien is also able to use any shadows touching his own shadow to increase the length. Finally, he is able to form multiple blades, but each one adds up to the length of his shadow.

Weakness: Because of the basis for his powers, Damien is weakest at noon, when his shadow is smallest, and in total darkness, where his shadow is nonexistent, a shadow requiring light to exist, after all. Multiple bright lights centered on him would also banish his shadow. The paler his shadow is, the weaker the integrity of the blades.

Armor: Damien's shadow blades become autonomous, blocking or parrying any attack that gets too close. These blades count little towards his shadow consumption.

Limit Break: This trick requires blood to activate- the more sacrificed, the more powerful it is. Casts the surrounding area in complete darkness. This is the only time when Damien is able to form blades with no light upon him.
Alright, here is my glorious character sheet. While none of you have to have the personality section, I feel as it might be a massive boon towards understanding your power.

Also, because this is a superpower RP, I merely wish to recapitulate for all:

No mind control, no char. control, no god-mod. You make this game unfun for someone else, you're out. That's all there is to it. A warning will be given for god-mod, but no char. control should be so deeply embedded within your minds you should want to piss on your favorite pet's grave first. That is all. Thank you for your co-operation.
I have tried to give an idea of my characters personality but i can add a new section if you think I need to.
Also would you say what my character does is mind control?
It seems...borderline. I don't like your breakdown final, but then again, since your power is not in any way aggressive other than that, it seems okay. Just remember, you're an empath, nothing else. You're also the best damn polygraph in the world, but that's besides the point. Just be careful when playing the character.
 

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Name: Red Chance

Description: Young at 17 and not very tall at 5"11' with a medium build and a thick uneven Mohawk with a slight red tinge. Constantly complains that he's freezing, wears leather fingerless gloves one black and one white, heavy black coat with a hood lined with fur and jeans. Two 9mm pistols on his waist and a 12 gauge shotgun strapped to his back, he also carries homemade grenades and explosives inside his coat. Carries two red dice at all times.

Bio: Born in the slums of Harbour city Red never cared much about life or anything really besides sleeping and games of chance. He slept through the majority of the week of Darkness, complaining that is was cold and didn't last long enough. After the darkness was lifted, Red felt no different if anything he felt worse, annoyed and bored he found an illegal dice game and quickly started winning big, too big as several of the player's felt he had been cheating and shot him in the head... twice. One year passed before Red woke up, the bullets had damaged his brain but had missed the most vital regions. The damage done to his brain unfortunately left him slightly crazy, prone to hallucination's, short-term memory, confusion and general oddness. The doctor's decided that while in his state of mind he was a danger to society and prepared to lock him in a mental facility, as luck would have it a nearby Shadow lost control of his powers and caused an explosion that allowed Red to escape. Never quite in control of himself Red occasionally found himself for hire by various criminal organization's and soon found himself enjoying the mayhem and destruction he created.

Personality: Crazy and unable to take anything seriously often getting distracted or forgetting what he was doing, carefree he often speaks his mind regardless of the situation or appropriateness. He enjoys the mayhem and confusion of Chaos and occasionally refers to himself as it's incarnation.

Power: Affect probability in his favor by making improbable (but not impossible) things to occur within his line of sight

Weakness: Highly Mentally Unstable, Probability is not always on his side, cannot affect the probability of something of he is unaware of it.

Armour: The odds are even more in Red's favor as his ability subconscious alerts him to nearby danger's.

limit break: Red can temporarily force himself to regain complete sanity and bend probability to his will forcing the most insanely of improbable of events to occur. Red clams "sanity hurts" and will go completely insane for at the minimum of 12 hours, though often longer, and become a danger to everyone.
A real name, please. You can have a nickname which you call yourself but just have a real name, if only for my sake? Thank you.

EDIT: Almost missed this: Get rid of the explosives. Civvies were not allowed frags before the Darkness, and they aren't allowed them now. And if you want to keep the pistols and shotgun, the absolute minimum age to buy firearms in the US is 18. Thank you for your co-operation.

And everyone? Please run your character sheets through spellcheck, or at least copy/paste them to Microsoft Word so it corrects most of your mistakes. Thank you.
 

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Working on a sheet. Are Limit Breaks required?
well you don't unlock them till later but I would like to see your idea for your limit break now it just helps when deciding who is in and out when picking characters.
 

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I'm interested. I'll make a female char since so far everyone else is male. Throw some variety in it ya know?

Name: Cree Fox
Description: Cree stands at 5'11" with a gangly thin build. She has messy brown hair which falls slightly below her shoulder blades, her eyes and a very light, almost white blue.
Cree is best described as very normal looking, finding it no challenge to blend into a crowd. She has a set of wings tattoo'd down her back, an angel wing down the right hand side of her back, with a devil wing down the left side. Dresses very plainly in a pair of dark blue skinny jeans and baggy white t-shirts of various designs.

Bio: Cree has lived in Harbour City for all 19 years of her life. While not caring for the city, she found it too interesting to leave, the sheer differences in people intrigued her.

The past few years of Cree's life had been the usual drag of waking up and going to school every day and studying most nights. Despite the pressure from other people to join in the heavy drinking that came with college, Cree steadfastly refused as it seemed pointless to her.

For her, life was fairly normal, that was until the Darkness took over...

Personality: Cree is aloof, always thinking she's better than everyone else to hide the fact she knows that she has achieved virtually nothing with her time. If someone manages to get close enough to her, they may find that she can be very sweet to them. She also has a strange hobby of 'people watching' seeing how normal people live their lives.

Power: Control of air pressure within two metres of her body. She normally makes use of this as an offensive power by creating 'weapons' from the pressure, such as 'fists' or 'whips' etc.

Weakness: Physically, Cree is useless. If she gets attacked even once, she's finished.

Armour: At a push, she can create a pulse, forcing everything out of her area.

Limit Break: Vacuum Crush. Her range of control increases to 10 metres with all air pressure being forced downwards, crushing everything except her within the area. The trade off of this attack is that it damages all of Cree's muscle heavily, rending her unable to move for several days after it's use.
If anything needs fixed, just tell me and I'll be happy to.
 

nuba km

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I'm interested. I'll make a female char since so far everyone else is male. Throw some variety in it ya know?
yea noticed that but power and background wise there is a fair bit of variety.
 

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avouleance2nd said:
nuba km said:
Time Travelling Toaster said:
I'm interested. I'll make a female char since so far everyone else is male. Throw some variety in it ya know?
yea noticed that but power and background wise there is a fair bit of variety.
Not to mention that Tom is probably not like the others in one or two other ways.
His disabilities for one.
yes and his powers aren't combat orientated and he has a connection with the politics (also when I read the description of how tom looks I think more of an old man then someone aged 32)
 

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avouleance2nd said:
nuba km said:
avouleance2nd said:
nuba km said:
Time Travelling Toaster said:
I'm interested. I'll make a female char since so far everyone else is male. Throw some variety in it ya know?
yea noticed that but power and background wise there is a fair bit of variety.
Not to mention that Tom is probably not like the others in one or two other ways.
His disabilities for one.
yes and his powers aren't combat orientated and he has a connection with the politics (also when I read the description of how tom looks I think more of an old man then someone aged 32)
I can change it if you want
you don't have to but I do think that he seems more like a old man 50-60
 

nuba km

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avouleance2nd said:
I don't mind changing it to say 57
it's up to you but I do think that would be a better age (you have till 8th to make up your mind)
 

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Time Travelling Toaster said:
I'm interested. I'll make a female char since so far everyone else is male. Throw some variety in it ya know?

Name: Cree Fox
Description: Cree stands at 5'11" with a gangly thin build. She has messy brown hair which falls slightly below her shoulder blades, her eyes and a very light, almost white blue.
Cree is best described as very normal looking, finding it no challenge to blend into a crowd. She has a set of wings tattoo'd down her back, an angel wing down the right hand side of her back, with a devil wing down the left side. Dresses very plainly in a pair of dark blue skinny jeans and baggy white t-shirts of various designs.

Bio: Cree has lived in Harbour City for all 19 years of her life. While not caring for the city, she found it too interesting to leave, the sheer differences in people intrigued her.

The past few years of Cree's life had been the usual drag of waking up and going to school every day and studying most nights. Despite the pressure from other people to join in the heavy drinking that came with college, Cree steadfastly refused as it seemed pointless to her.

For her, life was fairly normal, that was until the Darkness took over...

Personality: Cree is aloof, always thinking she's better than everyone else to hide the fact she knows that she has achieved virtually nothing with her time. If someone manages to get close enough to her, they may find that she can be very sweet to them. She also has a strange hobby of 'people watching' seeing how normal people live their lives.

Power: Control of air pressure within two metres of her body. She normally makes use of this as an offensive power by creating 'weapons' from the pressure, such as 'fists' or 'whips' etc.

Weakness: Physically, Cree is useless. If she gets attacked even once, she's finished.

Armour: At a push, she can create a pulse, forcing everything out of her area.

Limit Break: Vacuum Crush. Her range of control increases to 10 metres with all air pressure being forced downwards, crushing everything except her within the area. The trade off of this attack is that it damages all of Cree's muscle heavily, rending her unable to move for several days after it's use.
If anything needs fixed, just tell me and I'll be happy to.
just trying to figure out how your power relates to you personality/bio
 

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nuba km said:
Time Travelling Toaster said:
I'm interested. I'll make a female char since so far everyone else is male. Throw some variety in it ya know?

Name: Cree Fox
Description: Cree stands at 5'11" with a gangly thin build. She has messy brown hair which falls slightly below her shoulder blades, her eyes and a very light, almost white blue.
Cree is best described as very normal looking, finding it no challenge to blend into a crowd. She has a set of wings tattoo'd down her back, an angel wing down the right hand side of her back, with a devil wing down the left side. Dresses very plainly in a pair of dark blue skinny jeans and baggy white t-shirts of various designs.

Bio: Cree has lived in Harbour City for all 19 years of her life. While not caring for the city, she found it too interesting to leave, the sheer differences in people intrigued her.

The past few years of Cree's life had been the usual drag of waking up and going to school every day and studying most nights. Despite the pressure from other people to join in the heavy drinking that came with college, Cree steadfastly refused as it seemed pointless to her.

For her, life was fairly normal, that was until the Darkness took over...

Personality: Cree is aloof, tending to keep herself away from people by pretending to be better than them. Very rarely will she let down her guard for someone to get close to her. If the do however, they may find that Cree is a shy, sweet girl that is very caring for those close to her.

Power: Control of air pressure within two metres of her body. The power tends to manifest it's self as a repelling blast. If forced to, Cree can make use of the pressure to attack.

Weakness: Physically, Cree is useless. If she gets attacked even once, she's finished.

Limit Break: Vacuum Crush. Her range of control increases to 10 metres with all air pressure being forced downwards, crushing everything except her within the area. The trade off of this attack is that it damages all of Cree's muscle heavily, rending her unable to move for several days after it's use.
If anything needs fixed, just tell me and I'll be happy to.
just trying to figure out how your power relates to you personality/bio
I forgot to fix that, I started with the power but forgot to link it. It should make more sense now. Hopefully.
 

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Time Travelling Toaster said:
nuba km said:
Time Travelling Toaster said:
I'm interested. I'll make a female char since so far everyone else is male. Throw some variety in it ya know?

Name: Cree Fox
Description: Cree stands at 5'11" with a gangly thin build. She has messy brown hair which falls slightly below her shoulder blades, her eyes and a very light, almost white blue.
Cree is best described as very normal looking, finding it no challenge to blend into a crowd. She has a set of wings tattoo'd down her back, an angel wing down the right hand side of her back, with a devil wing down the left side. Dresses very plainly in a pair of dark blue skinny jeans and baggy white t-shirts of various designs.

Bio: Cree has lived in Harbour City for all 19 years of her life. While not caring for the city, she found it too interesting to leave, the sheer differences in people intrigued her.

The past few years of Cree's life had been the usual drag of waking up and going to school every day and studying most nights. Despite the pressure from other people to join in the heavy drinking that came with college, Cree steadfastly refused as it seemed pointless to her.

For her, life was fairly normal, that was until the Darkness took over...

Personality: Cree is aloof, tending to keep herself away from people by pretending to be better than them. Very rarely will she let down her guard for someone to get close to her. If the do however, they may find that Cree is a shy, sweet girl that is very caring for those close to her.

Power: Control of air pressure within two metres of her body. The power tends to manifest it's self as a repelling blast. If forced to, Cree can make use of the pressure to attack.

Weakness: Physically, Cree is useless. If she gets attacked even once, she's finished.

Limit Break: Vacuum Crush. Her range of control increases to 10 metres with all air pressure being forced downwards, crushing everything except her within the area. The trade off of this attack is that it damages all of Cree's muscle heavily, rending her unable to move for several days after it's use.
If anything needs fixed, just tell me and I'll be happy to.
just trying to figure out how your power relates to you personality/bio
I forgot to fix that, I started with the power but forgot to link it. It should make more sense now. Hopefully.
I see the connection now.
 

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avouleance2nd said:
Random question.
In this world is there anyway to tell someone has powers without seeing them use them?
only if the powers actually change their body for example someone having acid trip off of him it will be easy to tell that he has powers.
 

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avouleance2nd said:
nuba km said:
avouleance2nd said:
Random question.
In this world is there anyway to tell someone has powers without seeing them use them?
only if the powers actually change their body for example someone having acid trip off of him it will be easy to tell that he has powers.
So no one will ever be able to tell for sure Tom has powers?
Considering both his could just be down to skill or endurance.
no one is able to tell tom has powers.
 

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Here ya go. Let me know if you want me to change/expand anything.

Name: Davis Johnson

Description: Davis is around 5'11. He has longish black hair that goes to the back of his neck, with very very blue eyes. He is thin, but has some muscle on him. He usually dresses in slightly baggy blue jeans, a red t-shirt with a leather jacket over it and black Converse. He also carries a carries a specially made sword that he can channel electricty down the blade, adding to its cutting power.

Bio: Davis has lived in Harbour City since he was born, 22 years ago. He lived with his parents and his older sister in a apartment in the middle class part of the city. This all changed when the Darkness hit. After it was over, while Harbour City was in disarray, some burglars decided to break into his apartment, killing his mother and father (his sister had moved out about 2 years before). Seeing his parents killed awakened his powers, accedentally killing the burglars. He ran to his sisters house, who convinced him to turn himself in the the government. He did, and they took him away for "questioning". While in the hands of the fed's they experimented on him and forced him to do tests for them. He escaped from the government around 6 months later, and has been hiding in the slums of Harbour City ever since.

Power: Electric manipulation, includes shooting electric blasts from his hands, controlling static electricity.

Weakness: Reckless, Davis usually charges straight into battle without thinking about the concequences.

Armour: Makes an electrical current around his body in a 5 foot radius protecting him harm and shocking anyone that gets close.

Limit break: Absorbs all electricity in an area and then uses it to increase speed and reflexs and powers. Problem with it is that it severely exhausts Davis and removes all electricty from the area, making his powers useless until he leaves the area.
 

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Here ya go. Let me know if you want me to change/expand anything.

Name: Davis Johnson

Description: Davis is around 5'11. He has longish black hair that goes to the back of his neck, with very very blue eyes. He is thin, but has some muscle on him. He usually dresses in slightly baggy blue jeans, a red t-shirt with a leather jacket over it and black Converse. He also carries a carries a specially made sword that he can channel electricty down the blade, adding to its cutting power.

Bio: Davis has lived in Harbour City since he was born, 22 years ago. He lived with his parents and his older sister in a apartment in the middle class part of the city. This all changed when the Darkness hit. After it was over, while Harbour City was in disarray, some burglars decided to break into his apartment, killing his mother and father (his sister had moved out about 2 years before). Seeing his parents killed awakened his powers, accedentally killing the burglars. He ran to his sisters house, who convinced him to turn himself in the the government. He did, and they took him away for "questioning". While in the hands of the fed's they experimented on him and forced him to do tests for them. He escaped from the government around 6 months later, and has been hiding in the slums of Harbour City ever since.

Power: Electric manipulation, includes shooting electric blasts from his hands, controlling static electricity.

Weakness: Reckless, Davis usually charges straight into battle without thinking about the concequences.

Armour: Makes an electrical current around his body in a 5 foot radius protecting him harm and shocking anyone that gets close.

Limit break: Absorbs all electricity in an area and then uses it to increase speed and reflexs and powers. Problem with it is that it severely exhausts Davis and removes all electricty from the area, making his powers useless until he leaves the area.
the weakness is meant to be something caused by the power e.g. my character not being able to touch things without corroding them (except for some things e.g. glass, the suit designed for him).
 

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name: Samuel "sunny" wakamlao

description: 5ft. 11 in. tall, long shoulder length jet black hair tied back in a pony tail, athletic build,

bio: 21 years old male born to immigrant parents who ran an antique shop in harbor city powers were discovered at the age of 12 when they went out of control and burned down his parents shop killing them he has a slightly unstable personality due to guilt felt over the death of his parents leading to rare depression and uncontrollable rage taught control through martial arts by a friend of the family a master in shoalin kung-fu

powers: control and generation of fire due to nature of power immunity from burns and high temperatures

weakness: large amounts of water if completely soaked or submerged in water powers will not work

armor: lava armor generate huge flame melting the rock and cement around him forming a malleable armor of lava rock and a staff of rock

limit break: Armageddon rains down large fiery comets that can level 3 city blocks leaves him completely drained and unable to use his powers for 30 hours thus leaving him vulnerable to burns


this is my first RP hope you like my character!!!
 

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name: Samuel "sunny" wakamlao

description: 5ft. 11 in., long shoulder length jet black hair tied back in a pony tail, athletic build,

bio: 21 years old male born to immigrant parents who ran an antique shop in harbor city powers were discovered at the age of 12 when they went out of control and burned down his parents shop killing them he has a slightly unstable personality due to guilt felt over the death of his parents taught control through martial arts by a friend of the family a martial arts master

powers: control and generation of fire due to nature of power immunity from burns and high temperatures

weakness: large amounts of water if completely soaked or submerged in water powers will not work

armor: lava armor generate huge flame melting the rock and cement around him forming a malleable armor of lava rock and a staff of rock

limit break: Armageddon rains down large fiery comets that can level 3 city blocks leaves him completely drained and unable to use his powers for 30 hours thus leaving him vulnerable to burns
Well. Where to start...
Flesh this out. Please. Copy/Paste it to Microsoft Word to fix the myriad grammatical problems, and then make your character a little more...believable. And while the base power is fine, fix the damn Limit Break. This is supposed to be an ultimate attack, yes, but it shouldn't force the US government to send the SWAT after you. Give me more of a description-when I read your desc., I want to be able to picture your character. Give me everything from weird scars to his normal attire! Look at my character sheet if you need a little help. Also, I think it would help you to put in a personality, to better mold your powers. While fire control is fine, it is a completely different thing than magma or lava. This last part is optional, but for the sake of the thread, please place your character sheet within a spoiler text, like all the others. As it is now, this sheet will not be accepted. Thank you for your co-operation.