Subliminal : : Cyberpunk RP
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I don't mean to criticize or nitpick, but your guy seems a little bit overpowered. The list of the things he can do just goes on and on and his only problem seems to be that he coughs blood. Don't be offended, I am just giving my opinion.FROGGEman2 said:
As to my sheet, I will start it when I get home from school tomorrow.
Most of it, like the lightning, is kinda... pathetic?Shapsters said:
I wouldn't be able to kill somebody, but people could be killed by me by accident.
Anyway, the GM said it rolls OK with him so it's all good.
I'm the only one with Augments that are purely cosmetic. Everyone else's are useful in some sort of hacking or combat situation.Exictednuke said:
Edit: I'm also the only one with any family.
It depends if you already have an idea of how you wanted to go about it. If you have a certain style or method that you would like to use, go ahead and do it. I would say to keep it to one or two posts unless I extend it as a plot point. If you were looking for ideas on how to actually write it, I would just Google it and read some other people's writing. That help at all?nightbringer360 said:
We'll start in a day or two. I'm still waiting on Shapster's sheet, so once I get it I'll pick who gets in.Exictednuke said:
Alright, finally got this thing finished up,
Name:Bastien Tapani
Age: 26
Augments: Eye Replacements - his eyes have been replaced with mechanical versions that appear as to glowing red orbs in his head, the give him thermal and night vision, as will as a binocular-like zooming abilities
Computer Arm Replacement - left arm replaced with a mechanical version with a computer built in, the touch screen folds into the forearm, and computer jacks that can be pulled out of the shoulder
Ear Implant - small mechanical implant in the right ear that allows him to hear things at a superhuman level
Appearance: 5'9, medium build, clothes are these ([link]http://www.rodengray.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/04/boo_20090331_0128.jpg[/link]) though replace the shorts in the picture with black slacks with matching dress shoes, his hair is clean shaven on both side expect for a half inch strip down the center that reaches down to his shoulders and usually hangs off one side of his head
Alignment: Unknown, been known to deal with all three but is "officially" wanted for crimes against all three
Bio: Bastien has spent his life devoted to science, spending his entire life savings to attend college and get his degrees in biology, medicine, chemistry, robotics. After graduating Bastien began working for Forge, developing helping develop the very technology the world now thrived on.Half a year into his new career he developed a set of robotic eyes that if implanted correctly could be used at replacements for the blind, but instead of testing them on an actual blind subject, he instead had his own eyes removed and replaced with the experimental technology. The gamble paid off as the operation was a success and his sight not only was restored, but greatly enhanced. He was commended for his invention and then released due to "psychological instability". Bastien shook of the shame of being fired directly after inventing a machine that could cure blindness, and took his abilities to Pillar where he put his knowledge of robotics to work. Bastien quickly developed an updated version of a robotic arm Pillar already offered, but with the addition of a built in computer with plugs to hook it up with other computers. As before with Forge, instead of testing with subjects that could benefit from the technology more, he had his own arm replaced with the prototype.
Again, his borderline insane gamble paid off and the arm responded to his every thought, and after some practice he could control the computer within the arm and removed any buttons and switches associated with such tasks. Continuing the similarity with his time with Forge, he was let go to due "psychological instability" and once again went else where in search of a job that could fund his experimental technology. Its unknown when it happened, but at some point during his job hopping he had become an informant for Tempest, spying on the competition and possibly even sabotaging other companies work. His work as an informant ended abruptly one year pryor to the Subliminal incident, and suddenly was advertised as a wanted criminal by Tempest. Since then he has fallen out from the public eye and over this last year has appeared as a wanted criminal by his former employers Forge and Pillar, though it is rumored he is still doing under-the-table deals with his former employers.
Age: 26
Augments: Eye Replacements - his eyes have been replaced with mechanical versions that appear as to glowing red orbs in his head, the give him thermal and night vision, as will as a binocular-like zooming abilities
Computer Arm Replacement - left arm replaced with a mechanical version with a computer built in, the touch screen folds into the forearm, and computer jacks that can be pulled out of the shoulder
Ear Implant - small mechanical implant in the right ear that allows him to hear things at a superhuman level
Appearance: 5'9, medium build, clothes are these ([link]http://www.rodengray.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/04/boo_20090331_0128.jpg[/link]) though replace the shorts in the picture with black slacks with matching dress shoes, his hair is clean shaven on both side expect for a half inch strip down the center that reaches down to his shoulders and usually hangs off one side of his head
Alignment: Unknown, been known to deal with all three but is "officially" wanted for crimes against all three
Bio: Bastien has spent his life devoted to science, spending his entire life savings to attend college and get his degrees in biology, medicine, chemistry, robotics. After graduating Bastien began working for Forge, developing helping develop the very technology the world now thrived on.Half a year into his new career he developed a set of robotic eyes that if implanted correctly could be used at replacements for the blind, but instead of testing them on an actual blind subject, he instead had his own eyes removed and replaced with the experimental technology. The gamble paid off as the operation was a success and his sight not only was restored, but greatly enhanced. He was commended for his invention and then released due to "psychological instability". Bastien shook of the shame of being fired directly after inventing a machine that could cure blindness, and took his abilities to Pillar where he put his knowledge of robotics to work. Bastien quickly developed an updated version of a robotic arm Pillar already offered, but with the addition of a built in computer with plugs to hook it up with other computers. As before with Forge, instead of testing with subjects that could benefit from the technology more, he had his own arm replaced with the prototype.
Again, his borderline insane gamble paid off and the arm responded to his every thought, and after some practice he could control the computer within the arm and removed any buttons and switches associated with such tasks. Continuing the similarity with his time with Forge, he was let go to due "psychological instability" and once again went else where in search of a job that could fund his experimental technology. Its unknown when it happened, but at some point during his job hopping he had become an informant for Tempest, spying on the competition and possibly even sabotaging other companies work. His work as an informant ended abruptly one year pryor to the Subliminal incident, and suddenly was advertised as a wanted criminal by Tempest. Since then he has fallen out from the public eye and over this last year has appeared as a wanted criminal by his former employers Forge and Pillar, though it is rumored he is still doing under-the-table deals with his former employers.
No, the sheets in the OP are all that have been submitted. They are not necessarily accepted yet.Quad08 said:So I'm assuming all the above sheets have been approved?Sporky111 said:
And yay, looking forward to starting soon
1. I said I would be screening entries at the very start.
2. With Shapsters, that makes eleven entries. Eleven people, plus myself is way too many to manage.
Thanks. *In the OP*FeralPhantom said:
Only if it's plausible and doesn't result in trenchcoating or god moding. If an alarm is tripped, you can't instantly turn it off; AI can't be affected ever; you can't wirelessly send a car crashing into an enemy; etc. It has to be at least a little bit time consuming, get my drift?nightbringer360 said:
My sheet! I hope its up to standards!
Name: Brenaya Nakagowa
Age: 22
Augments: Thumb turns to lighter [footnote][Case#43768]Joseph Thorwell: Murdered, thumb augment removed, no money stolen[/footnote]super sensitive ears[footnote][Case#65359]Michelle Jakorba: Murdered, found with both ears missing from head, money and wallet found on person[/footnote] infrared and night vision eyes[footnote][Case#98027]Cpl. Timothy Scott: Murdered, both eyes cleanly removed from sockets, wallet, ID, money still on persons[/footnote]steel stomach and lungs(not necessarily steel but she doesn't run out of air and she can consume many dangerous things)[footnote][Case#19057]Bob Vanderhoole: Murdered, abdomen cut into, stomach and ribs removed cleanly, wallet, money still found on persons[/footnote]
Appearance: Brenaya is half Japanese but it only slightly reflects on her appearance, she is 5'7, black, fairly curly hair; she is quite beautiful if you can look past the dirt and the scars on her face.
Alignment: None.
Bio: Brenaya was born and raised in a normal home and she seemed to be a normal child, she was a very bright child and easily breezed through school, even college was not much of a challenge. Being an augment doctor was her passion and she was very good at it, she was taken under the wing of a very powerful doctor and the man was very impressed by her skills. She was suddenly overtaken by paranoid schizophrenia and split personality disorder. Within a span of two weeks she had dropped out of college, attacked the doctor that she was working with, left her home and was living on the streets. She now spends her days fighting the voices in her head and trying to stay hidden from the doctors and authorities that are hunting her. A recent string of murders have occurred since Brenaya had found herself on the streets, all with one thing in common, nothing stolen except the augments that the victims had upon their bodies. The police have not figured out that she is a murderer but it will not take them long. She has only been on the streets for about 3 months and that is apparent, she does not look, nor act as though she belongs on the street.
Name: Brenaya Nakagowa
Age: 22
Augments: Thumb turns to lighter [footnote][Case#43768]Joseph Thorwell: Murdered, thumb augment removed, no money stolen[/footnote]super sensitive ears[footnote][Case#65359]Michelle Jakorba: Murdered, found with both ears missing from head, money and wallet found on person[/footnote] infrared and night vision eyes[footnote][Case#98027]Cpl. Timothy Scott: Murdered, both eyes cleanly removed from sockets, wallet, ID, money still on persons[/footnote]steel stomach and lungs(not necessarily steel but she doesn't run out of air and she can consume many dangerous things)[footnote][Case#19057]Bob Vanderhoole: Murdered, abdomen cut into, stomach and ribs removed cleanly, wallet, money still found on persons[/footnote]
Appearance: Brenaya is half Japanese but it only slightly reflects on her appearance, she is 5'7, black, fairly curly hair; she is quite beautiful if you can look past the dirt and the scars on her face.
Alignment: None.
Bio: Brenaya was born and raised in a normal home and she seemed to be a normal child, she was a very bright child and easily breezed through school, even college was not much of a challenge. Being an augment doctor was her passion and she was very good at it, she was taken under the wing of a very powerful doctor and the man was very impressed by her skills. She was suddenly overtaken by paranoid schizophrenia and split personality disorder. Within a span of two weeks she had dropped out of college, attacked the doctor that she was working with, left her home and was living on the streets. She now spends her days fighting the voices in her head and trying to stay hidden from the doctors and authorities that are hunting her. A recent string of murders have occurred since Brenaya had found herself on the streets, all with one thing in common, nothing stolen except the augments that the victims had upon their bodies. The police have not figured out that she is a murderer but it will not take them long. She has only been on the streets for about 3 months and that is apparent, she does not look, nor act as though she belongs on the street.