I think you've got it nailed now.Zemalac said:Finished this, or at least made it better.
Thanks! Criticism definitely helps. And yeah, I had an issue with the strings. They're too thick, too. D: Oh well. That was actually just made to test out my new blending sticks. Heh.Fightgarr said:Really nice. The only crit I can think of is that the strings of the violin (or is it a viola) look a bit awkward in terms of perspective. But the drawing feels soft, clean, and very tightly handled. You've definitely got some skill.Aqualung said:
Problem solved for the most part. The only thing I would do is show a bit of the back wall of the city and maybe add some more texture to the front mountain. With the texture on the back mountains, not having at least a slight amount of it looks a bit off. Really nice though. You've got the height and distance thing covered.Zemalac said:Finished this, or at least made it better.
Hey, no problem. I'm this thread's resident critic and art rambler. I've never been one to use blending sticks, but that's mostly because I work with line, in most of my drawings, rather than tone. Plus I mostly work in ink whilst drawing so blending sticks don't work so well. Heh.Aqualung said:Thanks! Criticism definitely helps. And yeah, I had an issue with the strings. They're too thick, too. D: Oh well. That was actually just made to test out my new blending sticks. Heh.
I love it, simply for the mutton chops. They're glorious.Zemalac said:Finished this, or at least made it better.
Righto, here is the link: http://www.youtube.com/user/CraigMetalHeadSharPhoe said:I've been super-busy with Kerrick requests the last few weeks, but I did finally mange to get my new Halloween avatar done.
Once I'm done with my current requests, I'll probably try to do a project that's a little more serious. Maybe.
Who exactly is Kerrick? Is he/she your own creation?SharPhoe said:I've been super-busy with Kerrick requests the last few weeks, but I did finally mange to get my new Halloween avatar done.
Once I'm done with my current requests, I'll probably try to do a project that's a little more serious. Maybe.
Easier way of hiding his feet: expand the magic glow around the staff. It looks sort of unfinished with the legs just cutting out right there. Other than that, awesome character.Fightgarr said:Anyway, here's my latest character design drawing. I have less information on my characters than someone like, say, Archemitis. I also don't have a fleshed out universe like Zemalac, but I do know that this dude is named Tulius, and he's a pissed off... dude.
The background is half-assed because its a character design so I couldn't really be bothered with it. I also realized the legs were super awkward looking because I'm awful at foreshortening feet so I did my cop-out trick of just fading them out into the background and claiming its atmospheric
Sorry, like I said, wrong picture.Vanguard_Ex said:Who exactly is Kerrick? Is he/she your own creation?
Very good idea. I will likely use that. Thank you very much.Zemalac said:Easier way of hiding his feet: expand the magic glow around the staff. It looks sort of unfinished with the legs just cutting out right there. Other than that, awesome character.
Oh no, I was just curious because I've seen that design as a fair few avatars around here. And fair enough, I won't make you tell it.SharPhoe said:Sorry, like I said, wrong picture.Vanguard_Ex said:Who exactly is Kerrick? Is he/she your own creation?
Anyway, Kerricks (the race name) are of my own creation, in a sense. It's a bit of a story.
Yep, I made all of those special for the people who requested them from me. I even madea a group specifically for said requests [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/groups/view/SharPhoe-s-Escapist-Club-for-Kerricks-S-P-E-C-K] since they were getting to catch on so much. Since then, I've been busy, busy, busy.Vanguard_Ex said:Oh no, I was just curious because I've seen that design as a fair few avatars around here. And fair enough, I won't make you tell it.