I think you've got it nailed now.Zemalac said:Finished this, or at least made it better.
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Thanks! Criticism definitely helps. And yeah, I had an issue with the strings. They're too thick, too. D: Oh well. That was actually just made to test out my new blending sticks. Heh.Fightgarr said:Really nice. The only crit I can think of is that the strings of the violin (or is it a viola) look a bit awkward in terms of perspective. But the drawing feels soft, clean, and very tightly handled. You've definitely got some skill.Aqualung said:
Problem solved for the most part. The only thing I would do is show a bit of the back wall of the city and maybe add some more texture to the front mountain. With the texture on the back mountains, not having at least a slight amount of it looks a bit off. Really nice though. You've got the height and distance thing covered.Zemalac said:Finished this, or at least made it better.
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Hey, no problem. I'm this thread's resident critic and art rambler. I've never been one to use blending sticks, but that's mostly because I work with line, in most of my drawings, rather than tone. Plus I mostly work in ink whilst drawing so blending sticks don't work so well. Heh.Aqualung said:Thanks! Criticism definitely helps. And yeah, I had an issue with the strings. They're too thick, too. D: Oh well. That was actually just made to test out my new blending sticks. Heh.
I love it, simply for the mutton chops. They're glorious.Zemalac said:Finished this, or at least made it better.
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Righto, here is the link: http://www.youtube.com/user/CraigMetalHeadSharPhoe said:I've been super-busy with Kerrick requests the last few weeks, but I did finally mange to get my new Halloween avatar done.
Once I'm done with my current requests, I'll probably try to do a project that's a little more serious. Maybe.![]()
Who exactly is Kerrick? Is he/she your own creation?SharPhoe said:I've been super-busy with Kerrick requests the last few weeks, but I did finally mange to get my new Halloween avatar done.
Once I'm done with my current requests, I'll probably try to do a project that's a little more serious. Maybe.![]()
Easier way of hiding his feet: expand the magic glow around the staff. It looks sort of unfinished with the legs just cutting out right there. Other than that, awesome character.Fightgarr said:Anyway, here's my latest character design drawing. I have less information on my characters than someone like, say, Archemitis. I also don't have a fleshed out universe like Zemalac, but I do know that this dude is named Tulius, and he's a pissed off... dude.
The background is half-assed because its a character design so I couldn't really be bothered with it. I also realized the legs were super awkward looking because I'm awful at foreshortening feet so I did my cop-out trick of just fading them out into the background and claiming its atmospheric![]()
Sorry, like I said, wrong picture.Vanguard_Ex said:Who exactly is Kerrick? Is he/she your own creation?
Very good idea. I will likely use that. Thank you very much.Zemalac said:Easier way of hiding his feet: expand the magic glow around the staff. It looks sort of unfinished with the legs just cutting out right there. Other than that, awesome character.
Oh no, I was just curious because I've seen that design as a fair few avatars around here. And fair enough, I won't make you tell it.SharPhoe said:Sorry, like I said, wrong picture.Vanguard_Ex said:Who exactly is Kerrick? Is he/she your own creation?
Anyway, Kerricks (the race name) are of my own creation, in a sense. It's a bit of a story.
Yep, I made all of those special for the people who requested them from me. I even madea a group specifically for said requests [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/groups/view/SharPhoe-s-Escapist-Club-for-Kerricks-S-P-E-C-K] since they were getting to catch on so much. Since then, I've been busy, busy, busy.Vanguard_Ex said:Oh no, I was just curious because I've seen that design as a fair few avatars around here. And fair enough, I won't make you tell it.