Pretty good, very well written, however I can't figure out the last line out, does it mean that there are no spiders in his head, or that there's no escape from them?rosemystica said:One I wrote:
There is no worse thing than spiders in your head.
He had found this out the hard way. It itched horribly, and it wasn't even an itch you could get to. Even if you tore out every lock of your hair, carefully, strand by strand. Even if you got right down to the skin and dug your ragged nails into it and scratched, putting all of your strength and fury into trying to scratch that itch, you still couldn't get to it. It just kept itching.
And it was noisy, too. The crawling of the spiders was awful loud. He wished they were quiet, like normal spiders on nature shows, like the Discovery channel used to have. He used to watch the Discovery channel; he liked the shows about sharks. Sharks were pretty cool, and he always liked watching those crazy motherfuckers who'd go down and try to pet the sharks. He'd laughed at them with Danny and Rob. They'd bring some booze-cheap shit, but the good shit-and the cards for poker, and they would play a few games and watch Shark Week. They'd drink every time some idiot did something that would get the shark snapping at them, and be delightfully buzzed in no time at all. And he'd thought spiders were pretty cool, too, until they'd moved into his head. On the nature shows, they were quiet and just went about living their lives, not really bothering anyone. But these things! They built their hundreds of tiny webs in a cacophony of sharp steel strands, the unbearably loud scraping against the inside of his skull, and the endless crunching and clicking of thousands of tiny fangs.
Danny and Rob hadn't been over in an awful long time. He sort of wanted to see them and play poker again, or maybe smoke 'em at Monopoly; he was the only one in his wide circle of friends with the patience for Monopoly. And he always got Park Place and Boardwalk; he was good at the game, good at hustling deals like that. But it had been a long time since he'd felt like dragging himself out of bed. Not that he would have been able to anyway. Still, he just didn't feel like moving very much. It might've aggravated his tenants, and that would have made it itch even worse, because it would have wrecked their silvery webs. Would have made the noises louder. So he'd laid on his belly in his bed for weeks, staring at the headboard with wide, sleepless, staring eyes. He didn't dare to close his eyes, either. It might have bothered his tenants if he slept. He knew that he snored and that he tossed and turned. His last girlfriend had told him as much. Sort of missed her. She'd been a rose, she had, but she'd left him, and he couldn't quite remember why anymore, no more than he remembered why there were spiders nesting in his skull right now, or when it had started.
He scratched his head again, and howled, loud and piteously, as his ragged nails tore open several red gashes. Had itched so much, so furiously, that he'd dug fine little furrows down to the bone, and they never quite closed. Every time he dragged the fingernails across, trying to get to the maddening itch in his brain, he would tear open an old one and it would bleed afresh. Then the noise would become even louder, as if they were scolding him for ruining their work.
Hot tears slid down his dry face; he dug his nails into the rough sheets of his bed instead and let his head bleed. At least the itching had receded a little bit, for even just a second, before starting back up again amidst a racket of angry fang-clicking and whining steel strings. He groaned quietly and buried his head into the pillow. One ice-blue eye twitched as he felt dozens of tiny, spindly legs gingerly creeping over the back of it.
He felt a tiny, tight thread wind around the optic nerve directly behind his eyeball, and his eyelid twitched wildly again. Next would come the nightmares. They seemed to do this in cycles. First they'd crawl around weaving their webs. He'd scratch and tear open old wounds, shaking the spiders around. Then they'd continue weaving their webs, and they'd be careful to weave them around his eyes, too. That was how he knew. How he saw. He would see the spiders crawling through his skull, weaving intricate webs in the empty space.
Sometimes he could hold out for a day or two without scratching, if he really tried. But the longer the spiders spun, the worse the clicking and tugging and scraping and tapping would get. It would echo violently around his infested head, each tiny noise booming like thunder. The strings would squeeze too tightly around his eyes, or tiny hairy legs would sting at the inside of his skull--swift, tiny little pinpricks, multiplied by a thousand, each spindly leg scurrying gracefully, purposefully, around the cavernous hollow, as they strung up their shining, beautiful webs, cutting well-trodden tracks into the bone. Sometimes he just couldn't take it anymore, and he'd have to itch. Then they'd disappear from his mind for a short time, then it would just start up the whole vicious cycle again. And again. And again.
There's no escaping spiders in your head.
I love your contribution to the thread, but I would appreciate it if you spoiler it. Other than that keep the stories coming.David_G said:Snip
Yeah, sorry about that, I don't spoiler them because it seems like too much work, if that makes sense.Mcupobob said:I love your contribution to the thread, but I would appreciate it if you spoiler it. Other than that keep the stories coming.David_G said:Snip
I know this has been posted ages ago but I just wanted to add:rescuer86 said:The spelling and grammar police?zehydra said:I've got one:
So ur with ur honey and yur making out wen the phone rigns. U anser it n the vioce is ?wut r u doing wit my daughter?? U tell ur girl n she say ?my dad is ded?. THEN WHO WAS PHONE?
JESUS TITTY CHRIST.Stormz said:When you see it...
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*shrugs* I don't know, if I'm honest. I just borrowed some lines from an Ozzy Osbourne song. XD (The very first line is from the same song.)David_G said:Pretty good, very well written, however I can't figure out the last line out, does it mean that there are no spiders in his head, or that there's no escape from them?rosemystica said:One I wrote:
There is no worse thing than spiders in your head.
He had found this out the hard way. It itched horribly, and it wasn't even an itch you could get to. Even if you tore out every lock of your hair, carefully, strand by strand. Even if you got right down to the skin and dug your ragged nails into it and scratched, putting all of your strength and fury into trying to scratch that itch, you still couldn't get to it. It just kept itching.
And it was noisy, too. The crawling of the spiders was awful loud. He wished they were quiet, like normal spiders on nature shows, like the Discovery channel used to have. He used to watch the Discovery channel; he liked the shows about sharks. Sharks were pretty cool, and he always liked watching those crazy motherfuckers who'd go down and try to pet the sharks. He'd laughed at them with Danny and Rob. They'd bring some booze-cheap shit, but the good shit-and the cards for poker, and they would play a few games and watch Shark Week. They'd drink every time some idiot did something that would get the shark snapping at them, and be delightfully buzzed in no time at all. And he'd thought spiders were pretty cool, too, until they'd moved into his head. On the nature shows, they were quiet and just went about living their lives, not really bothering anyone. But these things! They built their hundreds of tiny webs in a cacophony of sharp steel strands, the unbearably loud scraping against the inside of his skull, and the endless crunching and clicking of thousands of tiny fangs.
Danny and Rob hadn't been over in an awful long time. He sort of wanted to see them and play poker again, or maybe smoke 'em at Monopoly; he was the only one in his wide circle of friends with the patience for Monopoly. And he always got Park Place and Boardwalk; he was good at the game, good at hustling deals like that. But it had been a long time since he'd felt like dragging himself out of bed. Not that he would have been able to anyway. Still, he just didn't feel like moving very much. It might've aggravated his tenants, and that would have made it itch even worse, because it would have wrecked their silvery webs. Would have made the noises louder. So he'd laid on his belly in his bed for weeks, staring at the headboard with wide, sleepless, staring eyes. He didn't dare to close his eyes, either. It might have bothered his tenants if he slept. He knew that he snored and that he tossed and turned. His last girlfriend had told him as much. Sort of missed her. She'd been a rose, she had, but she'd left him, and he couldn't quite remember why anymore, no more than he remembered why there were spiders nesting in his skull right now, or when it had started.
He scratched his head again, and howled, loud and piteously, as his ragged nails tore open several red gashes. Had itched so much, so furiously, that he'd dug fine little furrows down to the bone, and they never quite closed. Every time he dragged the fingernails across, trying to get to the maddening itch in his brain, he would tear open an old one and it would bleed afresh. Then the noise would become even louder, as if they were scolding him for ruining their work.
Hot tears slid down his dry face; he dug his nails into the rough sheets of his bed instead and let his head bleed. At least the itching had receded a little bit, for even just a second, before starting back up again amidst a racket of angry fang-clicking and whining steel strings. He groaned quietly and buried his head into the pillow. One ice-blue eye twitched as he felt dozens of tiny, spindly legs gingerly creeping over the back of it.
He felt a tiny, tight thread wind around the optic nerve directly behind his eyeball, and his eyelid twitched wildly again. Next would come the nightmares. They seemed to do this in cycles. First they'd crawl around weaving their webs. He'd scratch and tear open old wounds, shaking the spiders around. Then they'd continue weaving their webs, and they'd be careful to weave them around his eyes, too. That was how he knew. How he saw. He would see the spiders crawling through his skull, weaving intricate webs in the empty space.
Sometimes he could hold out for a day or two without scratching, if he really tried. But the longer the spiders spun, the worse the clicking and tugging and scraping and tapping would get. It would echo violently around his infested head, each tiny noise booming like thunder. The strings would squeeze too tightly around his eyes, or tiny hairy legs would sting at the inside of his skull--swift, tiny little pinpricks, multiplied by a thousand, each spindly leg scurrying gracefully, purposefully, around the cavernous hollow, as they strung up their shining, beautiful webs, cutting well-trodden tracks into the bone. Sometimes he just couldn't take it anymore, and he'd have to itch. Then they'd disappear from his mind for a short time, then it would just start up the whole vicious cycle again. And again. And again.
There's no escaping spiders in your head.
Seriously... I can't handle this thread... people keep bringing it back...Scarecrow 8 said:Please let this thread die. I may never sleep again.
Oh my god, now if I saw that picture at first I would be like 'meh' but then BAM! Wow sir I was scared shitlessStandby said:JESUS TITTY CHRIST.Stormz said:When you see it...
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That's the first thing in this thread that's ever freaked me out, i was just about to give up looking at it aswell..
Heh... mickey mouse...Wolfy1328 said::shivers:
mickey mouse cancels out the scary..........
Gaaah!David_G said:Heh... mickey mouse...Wolfy1328 said::shivers:
mickey mouse cancels out the scary..........
So do any of you remember those Mickey Mouse cartoons from the 1930s? The ones that were just put out on DVD a few years ago? Well, I hear there is one that was unreleased to even the most avid classic Disney fans. According to sources, it's nothing special. It's just a continuous loop (like The Flintstones) of Mickey walking past six buildings that goes on for two or three minutes before fading out. Unlike the cutesy tunes put in though, the song on this cartoon was not a song at all, just a constant banging on a piano as if the keys for a minute and a half before going to white noise for the remainder of the film. It wasn't the jolly old Mickey we've come to love either, Mickey wasn't dancing, not even smiling, just kind of walking as if you or I were walking, with a normal facial expression, but for some reason his head tilted side to side as he kept this dismal look. Up until a year or two ago, everyone believed that after it cut to black and that was it. When Leonard Maltin was reviewing the cartoon to be put in the complete series, he decided it was too junk to be on the DVD, but wanted to have a digital copy due to the fact that it was a creation of Walt. When he had a digitized version up on his computer to look at the file, he noticed something. The cartoon was actually 9 minutes and 4 seconds long. This is what my source emailed to me, in full (he is a personal assistant of one of the higher executives at Disney, and acquaintance of Mr. Maltin himself).
After it cut to black, it stayed like that until the sixth minute, before going back into Mickey walking. The sound was different this time. It was a murmur. It wasn't a language, but more like a gurgled cry. As the noise got more indistinguishable and loud over the next minute, the picture began to get weird. The sidewalk started to go in directions that seemed impossible based on the physics of Mickey's walking. And the dismal face of the mouse was slowly curling into a smirk. On the seventh minute, the murmur turned into a bloodcurdling scream (the kind of scream painful to hear) and the picture was getting more obscure. Colors were happening that shouldn't have been possible at the time. Mickey face began to fall apart. his eyes rolled on the bottom of his chin like two marbles in a fishbowl, and his curled smile was pointing upward on the left side of his face. The buildings became rubble floating in midair and the sidewalk was still impossibly navigating in warped directions, a few seeming inconceivable with what we, as humans, know about direction. Mr. Maltin got disturbed and left the room, sending an employee to finish the video and take notes of everything happening up until the last second, and afterward immediately stored the disc of the cartoon into the vault. This distorted screaming lasted until eight minutes and a few seconds in, and then it abruptly cuts to the Mickey Mouse face at the credits of the end of every video with what sounded like a broken music box playing in the background. This happened for about thirty seconds, and whatever was in that remaining thirty seconds I haven't been able to get a sliver of information. From a security guard working under me who was making rounds outside of that room, I was told that after the last frame, the employee stumbled out of the room with pale skin saying "Real suffering is not known" seven times before taking the guard's pistol and committing suicide. The thing I could get out of Leonard Maltin was that the last frame was a piece of Russian text that roughly said "The sights of Hell bring its viewers back in." As far as I know, no one else has seen it, but there have been dozens of attempts at getting the file on RapidShare by employees inside the studios, all of whom have been promptly terminated of their jobs. If you find this film, do not watch it.