On the Come Up (3/5)
This is Angie Thomas's second novel and is set in the same universe as The Hate U Give (also part of a wider shared universe apparently), taking place about a year after said novel. I'm going to say from the outset that you don't need to read THUG to understand this novel, but it does benefit from having read it, since frequent reference is made to THUG in the book. Broad-level events, yes, but when characters refer to "the boy killed by the police" and observe the fallout from the riots (various businesses haven't been rebuilt), then it does benefit from having read its predecessor. That said, what I'm also going to say from the start that of the two, OTCU is the weaker work than THUG. I've read that Thomas was on a deadline for the book, which may be so, but while that might explain its flaws, it doesn't absolve them.
So, anyway, story focuses on Brianna, living in the same neighbourhood that Starr did in the previous book. Single mother, dead father, brother who's working minimum wage despite graduating from college. Troubles in school, but is an excellent rapper, rags to riches, go. Yeah, bit of a simplification, but part of the issue with the work is that it lacks a sense of focus. In THUG, most of the story stems from Khalil's shooting. Everything Starr and her family does can be said to be in reaction to that event, or the consequenes of said event. OTCU doesn't have the same focus. It sort of muddles along. Things happen, but they're not that integral to the main plot. For instance, there's a sub-plot with security guards in Bri's school. She ends up being slammed to the ground, they're fired, then brought back, then attacked, then there's a staff-parent-student meeting, and some students for the Black and Latinx Coalition, and...that's it. While these events are arguably relevant to Bri's character, they're superfluous to the plot. THUG had similar 'fat' as well (hence why I think the film is better, because it streamlines the plot), but the 'fat' has piled on in OTCU.
There's also the issue that a lot of what you get out of this book will depend on how much you know about rap. For instance, if I was to list three of Bri's loves, they'd be Star Wars, Black Panther, and rap. I know a lot about the first thing, a fair amount about the second thing (as in, I've seen the movie, and I'm aware of the "Wakanda forever" meme), and next to nothing about rap. So when characters reference who I assume are famous rappers, I'm at a blank. This isn't a criticism of the work, because a work isn't obliged to explain its cultural references, but it did leave me coming up blank. However, what does work are the rap lyrics themselves, which are original to the story (as in, "On the Come Up" is the name of Bri's own rap song). I'm not really the best person to judge, but I'd say they're pretty good. They rhyme, flow well, carry thematic weight, etc. If anything, the rap sections here work better than poetry sections in a lot of other work, because there isn't the sense that the story is stopping for poetry, but rather that the rap is part of the story.
So, yeah. It's an okay read, but not without issues, and as stated, THUG is easily the superior work.