A Human Day

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Dorothy Shepard really showed how sexy scars are, especially with that red hair. A drell can get a woman but I can't, foreveralone.
 

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blackrave said:
I don't get it
There are no polygons, then how can there be emotions?
Grey, did you rendered this comic on Frostbite or Cryengine?
Because there must be polygons, simply must.
And a lot of them.

P.S. Although must admit Door had more polygons ;)
Gah! Stop reminding me of the other emotions- I mean, ploygo- I mean, emotions! Are you trying to make me miserable?!

The Wooster said:
sid said:
Woah woah woah, "another"? Somewhere in the Escapist there's a second one of these? I desperately need a link
Here you go. [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/articles/view/comics/escapist-comics/9758-Blue-Rose-of-Illium]
Not you, too!

PS: Also, I've thought of a dedication: "That was for Thane, you son of a *****!"
 

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Product Placement said:
I'm trying to figure out where this story fits in to the main storyline. I'm guessing it takes place on the citadel but they encounter a ruined diner during their date. Now, this can't be taking place after the second citadel attack, since...

Thane gets killed in that attack

So I'm left to guess that this is damage left from the first attack, from the ending of the first game, but Anderson tells you that the Citadel is nearly restored, when you first meet him in ME2.
It could be any day between when you first meet him in Huerta Memorial and when get to the spoiler tag time.
By then, enough time has passed that the Citadel would have fully recovered from the first attack. It doesn't fly in my logic center. As I said, Anderson comments on how quick the repairs have been to the citadel. He even specifically points out that the main commerce districts and population centers were already fully repaired. Then we have to account at least 6 more months of repair time, between the events of the Arrival DLC and the beginning of ME3.

Even if they hadn't finished rebuilding that particular district, they would have at very least finished clearing out the rubble.

Still liked the story, none the less.
 

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So many feels. Brings me back to when I played citadel the first time. How pailful it is to say goodbye. To move on. Great comic guys. Makes me wish I could forget all about mass effect just so I can play it all over as if i'm playing it the first time. ^^
 

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Thane was probably my favorite male character, both the right amount of alien quality and yet so sad of a story, so terminal. And that was so my Shep... down to the scars. Wow, I am moved and happy by this comic, thank you Grey and Rachel for this awesome piece. I'd so pay for a physical copy to lovingly display it...
Wherein art is derivative, it is still unique for us all.
 

The Wooster

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I don't want to come off as ungrateful but the writing style is comparable to shoujo manga :0
Still I'm gonna save it to my hard drive >:3
Which one? I can't tell if that's an insult or a compliment.
 

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This feels reminds me of Samaras story. I didn't stop her in M3 and her last daughter died, because the real world sometimes distracts. So helpless, powerless, i kept playing this sheperd with that.

Just asking, did anyone play a xenophobe to the end?
 

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Fantastic stuff, gang. I particularly like the subtle dichotomy in the movie scene; Thane lamenting that this is being added to his permanent memory base, while Shepard is probably using the most mindless movie imaginable to deliberately blot out the memories she doesn't want to recall right now. Neat.
 

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This was still nice even though I have no emotional connection to Thane. He was forever stowed in my ship, even dying once because I forgot to do his loyalty mission...
 

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Candidus said:
JoJo said:
I liked it, something different from our usual fare, although re: page 7 in particular shows why I'm somewhat dubious about the claims this site is meant to be PG13. Nonetheless, an interesting take on the Mass Effect world.
13+ is old enough to see a woman straddling a man. Most 13 year old men have been sexually aware for a long time (since well before they were 10); they already know what their fetishes are and they already have a porn folder hidden somewhere on the family's computer. I can't speak for the ladies, but I wouldn't be surprised to hear much the same.
13 year old men? I think the word you're looking for is adolescent, a 13 year old may not really be a child any-longer (whatever the law may say) but they're not an adult either. But yeah, I agree completely but unfortunately a lot of people don't and interpret PC13 as 'no sex please' for threads. Seems a little incongruent given a lot of the official content here but whatever :p
 

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Entitled said:
I hate fanfiction.

More specifically, I hate this concept of "fanfiction", as a separate, inherently less respectable form of creativity than the other stories that happen to be approved by a copyright monopoly.

In art, there are no "original stories", and "stealing", only stories that are ALL derviatively based on one another, yet all adding something new.
I think I agree with you, assuming you mean fanfiction is not a lower form of art or anything like that. It's quality varies just like everything else and it can lead to some really annoying legal battles, some which are the fault of companies, occassionally they are the fault of the fanfiction writer.

So yeah, not much difference at all.

OT: Excellent comic, never tried this paring in mass effect but maybe I will now.
 

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Holy crap that opening acknowledgement about filling gaps over "improving". I'm so glad to view source material for fan fiction that way rather than warp crap to your own ends. Enjoyed it from start to finish.
 

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Dark Knifer said:
I think I agree with you, assuming you mean fanfiction is not a lower form of art or anything like that. It's quality varies just like everything else and it can lead to some really annoying legal battles, some which are the fault of companies, occassionally they are the fault of the fanfiction writer.
They can be the "fault of the writer" in a common sense meaning, that is, if you knowingly disobey copyright law and get sued, you kind of had it coming.

But looking at a bigger picture of copyright's morality, it is pretty atrocious that nowadays publishers can get away with stretching intellectual "property" so far, that it extends to banning other people's works just because it uses an "universe" that they claim to control.

"Fanfiction" as a thing only exists because of this "IP" control. Historically, picking up previous writers' works and continuing, altering, or countering them, has always been a main form of creativity. Homer's Iliad wasn't a greek superhero crossover fanfic, and Virgil's Aeneid wasn't an Iliad spinoff ignoring the continuity set by The Odyssey, these were just people writing what they knew.

That nowadays comparable works would be called fanfics, that writers have to hide along the grey areas of non-commercial Fair Use, and/or flying under the publisher's radar, so the only motivation left to continue with their legally unpublishable work is fannish obsession, is in itself an unnatural state.
 

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Entitled said:
This is true. In the instance of blaming the writers of fanfiction I was talking a specific example which I should have mentioned but I am lacking details as I can't seem to find the website but an author of an established series was working on the 4th book of the franchise. She came across a fanfiction of her work which hald a rather similar premise to her yet-to-be-released book so she did the right thing and contacted that author and offered compensation to the fanfiction writer so she could use her idea. This was merely a coincidence but the fanction author demanded co-authorship of new book and 50% of all profits.

So the book never got made because of fanfiction.

Overall, I think fanfiction can be a wonderful thing but many established writers, not companies, take issue with fanfiction, such as George.R.R Martins of Song of ice and fire fame.

As it is with most things both sides can be excellent or extremely petty but I do enjoy certain fanfiction, like 'The Unity Saga'
A Star wars/Star Trek cross over.