It's a badly written character. MS is just a simplification people use. You argue over colloquialism and its negative English language rooted or re-branded connotations? O-K propose different names to describe symptoms of badly written character I listed and I'll happily use these (even though I don't recall myself using the MS collocation, other than someone already bringing it up to discussion, because to me it just feels odd as a term).Kyrian007 said:It didn't go over my head, its shield bs. If "mary sue" isn't about gender and its just a colloquialism... then why is it a gendered term AT ALL? "Wow, Rey's character ark is hackneyed, cliche, shoddy, trashy, deer on a rut" you're right, plenty of ways to describe it. Just based on the arguments I've seen online here and in other places... "mary sue" is a colloquialism/accusation ONLY used by the redpiller idiots or their ilk. Defense of the term is just deflection. "Oh, I'm not racist just because I call _____ people _____. That word goes back to yadda yadda whatever shield bs." I've never personally seen the term "mary sue" used by anyone who DIDN'T turn out to have a problem with the gender of the person in question. It may only have been a part of their issue with the character, it even may have accompanied legitimate arguments about character development... but its always a part.Jamcie Kerbizz said:How did the obvious part that MS criticizm isn't about gender went over your head? Get it through your narrow mind that it's just collocation in English, language overwhemingly foreign to everyone discussing things on internet. Adequote synonyms in other languages describing mary sue criticism aren't gendered at all... ._.Kyrian007 said:Maybe there was a time when that was true, but it really isn't any more. Its a shield. Crying little manchildren screaming about mary sue and pandering just because someone dares to write a story about someone other than a man and makes them actually good at something. No gender, no nationality, no race is OWED any part. Any complaint based on gender is just the mewling of triggered morons.Dalsyne said:I feel the need to interject - saying that a character's a mary sue is criticism, not sexism. And as far as I'm concerned it's never going to be sexism. Please stop coming here in bad faith and poisoning the well by morally condemning people with valid criticisms.Kyrian007 said:That's EXACTLY my point. It wouldn't be a problem. They aren't making it a gender issue, they just wrote a story. The people crying about "mary sue" and "pandering to Feminists" are making it about gender.
In general meaning is that writer tried to put in so much pathos in character, so hard, that it made said creation unreal and grotesque, outlandish, out of place, irrationaly omnipotent - surprisingly out of character.
Would be easier to communicate it in other language. I personally would reframe it in English to much older denominatio - that being baroque style - concentrating too much on form and detail and falling flat when it comes to actual tenor.
Depicting and piling up amazing feats, abilities and achievements but when you start looking into it and asking core questions such as how? why? what for? it just falls apart. Its an old, discredited and already recognised centuries ago as essence of shoddiness/trashiness(?) form of art. In one of other languages I know it's called roughly translating 'deer on a rut'.
As I wrote before all the pretense and none of substance.
Understand, that most people don't care for this colloquialism. These are just words in foreign language. They don't use it because they are 'redpilled' they use it because meaning covers issues they have with character and because so many other people also use that.
Also the 2nd part of your reasoning is horridly unsound. You project demeanour of people using collocation on the words and the meaning themselves. Then you seem to reflect that demeanour on any person that uses this collocation. That is irrational.
Problem you seem to have and try to deflect instead of addressing it, is that Rey and Holdo are badly written and that some people who don't want to see female characters at all, can revel in this fact going a-ha-ha about it. Just by saying yeah they overdid some of aspects of their characters and didn't think through other would instantly grant you win on all ends:
# shut the fuck up any, actual women hater, they now can either go out on a nut case 'it's because of their gender rant' or leave since you agreed on merits of the critique
# strengten feedback to writers, do the f-ing better job next time
# open up strong case to argue personal taste - aka you aknowledge shortcomings but still enjoyed it (so deal with it)