And there I had written you guys off as hopeless! This improved in every way it needed to improve. The editing could still be a bit sharper and Chris Slack needs some basic acting lessons - actually vocal coaching would do - but if the next episode improves on this one as much as this improved on the first two, I'll bookmark De-rez.
The script this time around was really, really good. I thought your last couple of scripts were solid, but this one was a pearler.
The sound effects shined in places! Shooting the cat off-screen is an old joke but a good one. The "thwack!"s of the gun beating the zombie were great, very game-ish. And the way the dramatic music came on and off abruptly was used well, too: without the music, the plant-face joke would have been awkward and stodgy (like most of the first two De-rez movies), but with the music over the top it worked a treat.
Stephen Colfer lends support to the theory that the Irish are inherently funnier than everyone else. More of him, please! "Why did you only set it to five minutes?! ... You couldn't have given us like an hour, or anything." That bit had perfect comic timing and great delivery, it honestly made me think of a stand-up comedian.
Chris Slack: I don't know if it's an accent or an affectation, but can you try not to speak... the way you speak? Whether it's part of your normal voice or not, you sound like you're putting on a "funny" accent and it can be quite jarring. The permanent half-smile was also not the ideal expression to be holding for the whole video; a slightly more serious face would have both contrasted better with the silliness of the game dialogue and made it seem less like you're a kid making a video in your parents' house. (I'm sorry if I sound like a typical internet jerk. I really think these improvements would make your videos more watchable.)
The way Leon moved in straight lines and turned on the spot was perfect. It really captured the way it feels to play RE games (it's so frustrating!) - but the walk itself was a bit too exaggerated. It was too much of a prance. Not that bad, but distracting.
I expected to hate this and it surprised me. Good job lads, you might have a future as Funny Internet Personalities after all.