Erin and Erin
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I know what you mean Ive regained all my hoe, im swimming in hoe, full of it. I lost my hoe for a bit but ive yanked on the choke chain. Alright ill stop, I know what you mean somehow changing randomly to something less predictable feels like the right direction. A pretty direct yet effective way of solving the pacing issues plaguing this story arc.J-meMalone said:
Also it reminds me of Psychonauts which is always good.
Meanwhile, she's still just hanging by her ankles. How long will she be in headspace in real life terms? Will she be held there for like half an hour or something? Good to see a nice twist in this arc.
Way I see it, there's two options for how to interpret this. Either this is an existential experience for Erin where she has to confront parts of her own personality and mentality...oooor all the blood's rushed to her head and has taken her hallucinations to the next level.
Inside her head she learns something about herself. Comes back to reality and makes up with the crazy fucker who pushed her out of a window, and they become friends.
There is cleverness some of the time, but the over-arcing boring plot is really dragging it down. Its so predictable. Even when you pull shit like "He's going to forgive h-NOPE OUT THE WINDOW" you still know he is going to forgive her.
There is cleverness some of the time, but the over-arcing boring plot is really dragging it down. Its so predictable. Even when you pull shit like "He's going to forgive h-NOPE OUT THE WINDOW" you still know he is going to forgive her.
Long time lurker. Posting just to say: I really like the story and I'm grateful for the effort you put in. While people are complaining about pace and/or predictability. I know when a new reader reads thru the archive the first time in months in the future the extra effort will be well worth it. Good job and don't cave to instant-gratification junkies and write the story you want to tell. And re-lurking(is that a word?) in 3....2....1.
Anyone notice panel 4 she says meatspace instead of headspace, or am I flying over a joke here?
Good comic anyways. I wish I could control physics. I need to have another lucid dream.
Good comic anyways. I wish I could control physics. I need to have another lucid dream.
Maybe cause this isn't some erotic comic and having your main character with boobs in her face kinda uh... takes away from the story. It's such a minor detail, why does it bother youMe55enger said:
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