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@Steeple: I answer your criticism... WITH ANOTHER POEM!
<spoiler=Chocolate>Why was I drawn to this bar of chocolate?
I certainly don?t want to eat it
I thought I?d enjoy it but? no
I used to eat so many of you, without a single care
Constant devour, I loved it
But not anymore
I wonder should I eat you as constantly as I did
Or to merely have you rarely, and enjoy you
I suppose it?s just another sick joke that is my life
I really just don?t feel able to eat you
It may perhaps make my peers happy but? ugh
I think I?ll just give up
<spoiler=Chocolate>Why was I drawn to this bar of chocolate?
I certainly don?t want to eat it
I thought I?d enjoy it but? no
I used to eat so many of you, without a single care
Constant devour, I loved it
But not anymore
I wonder should I eat you as constantly as I did
Or to merely have you rarely, and enjoy you
I suppose it?s just another sick joke that is my life
I really just don?t feel able to eat you
It may perhaps make my peers happy but? ugh
I think I?ll just give up
@mParadox: mKay, I write them to deter depression so I don't think it's likely that i'll stop
@Steeple: Oh um... yeah sure >.>
(that poem is a general response to your views of it, I just typed it up quickly and it has deeper meaning if you care to find it...)
@Steeple: Oh um... yeah sure >.>
(that poem is a general response to your views of it, I just typed it up quickly and it has deeper meaning if you care to find it...)
@thundero: let me ask you this: do you write because you enjoy writing, or because you have something to express?
I always felt that this song's lyrics were extremely powerful, and you should note he doesnt say "he used drugs/stabbed a person/got raped", but actually tells it as a small story and brings it slowly... I just think it's beautifully done...
@mParadox: Oh, Chocolate wasn't really meant to be good, it was just to show @Steeple: the problems with his criticism, in a way that establishes his criticisms, it's to one-up him basically 
As for you, read this:
<spoiler=Untitled>Sitting around in a damp, gloomy park
Wondering what the point is in continuing
Certain people have tried to show me that I shouldn't care, yet again
But nonetheless I continue to label them as friends
In many ways knowing there are those crazy enough to care for me
Is worse then being under the impression that there aren't
On one side of life, I have all the cons of friends
On the other, the same but with enemies
It just doesn't seem that anyone realises just how much I detest lonliness
Or, just how much I crave it
Ultimately, life is a bad box of chocolates from your mother
It?s awful, but I continue eating them just to avoid disappointment
So, I must simply accept that master twenty two is in control of my life
And move on
I wrote that earlier today...
As for you, read this:
<spoiler=Untitled>Sitting around in a damp, gloomy park
Wondering what the point is in continuing
Certain people have tried to show me that I shouldn't care, yet again
But nonetheless I continue to label them as friends
In many ways knowing there are those crazy enough to care for me
Is worse then being under the impression that there aren't
On one side of life, I have all the cons of friends
On the other, the same but with enemies
It just doesn't seem that anyone realises just how much I detest lonliness
Or, just how much I crave it
Ultimately, life is a bad box of chocolates from your mother
It?s awful, but I continue eating them just to avoid disappointment
So, I must simply accept that master twenty two is in control of my life
And move on
I wrote that earlier today...